_____________________________________________________________________________ T H E K R Y P T O N I A N C Y B E R N E T _______________________________________________ http://www.ms.uky.edu/~sykes/kc Issue #45 - December 1997 _____________________________________________________________________________ CONTENTS -------- Section 1: Superscripts: Notes from the Editor Selling Superman Ratings At A Glance Titles Shipped November 1997 News and Notes Several quick bits on upcoming comics; about the upcoming DC mugs; Superman Multipath Adventures; Superman Lives news; and an update on STAS toys and the debut of Supergirl! Section 2: And Who Disguised As... The Basement Columns, Part I J.D. Rummel pours through dusty comics memories How It All Began Yosef Shoemaker explores the early difficulties of getting Superman off the ground Rising Above Limitations Enola Jones discusses situations in which the Man of Steel or his friends became disabled Section 3: New Comic Reviews The Superman Titles Superman: The Man of Steel #75, by Mike Smith Superman #131, by Thomas Deja Adventures of Superman #554, by Dan Radice Section 4: New Comic Reviews The Superman Titles (cont) Action Comics #741, by Shane Travis Super-Family Titles Steel #46, by Jeff Sykes Superboy #47, by Rene' Gobeyn Section 5: New Comic Reviews Super-Family Titles (cont) Superboy and the Ravers #17, by Jeff Sykes Supergirl #17, by Thomas Deja Other Superman Titles JLA #14, by Anatole Wilson Section 6: New Comic Reviews Other Superman Titles (cont) Superman Adventures #15, by Cory Strode Specials and Guest Appearances Superman: Secret Files and Origins #1, by Rene' Gobeyn Green Lantern #94, by Rene' Gobeyn Section 7: After-Byrne Manuscripts of Steel Action Comics Annual #3, by Denes House The Phantom Zone Tales of Earth-One Together Again For the First Time, by Bob Hughes Section 8: Superman: The Animated Series Episode Reviews "Solar Power", by Denes House "The Prometheon", by Curtis Herink "Father's Day", by Nathan Bredfeldt "Warrior Queen", by Scott Devarney Section 9: The Mailbag STAFF: ------ Jeffery D. Sykes, Editor-in-Chief Shane Travis, Executive Editor: New Comic Reviews Neil Ottenstein, Executive Editor: S:TAS section Editors: Chip Chandler Steve Hanes D.M. Simms Joe Crowe Curtis Herink Shane Travis Trevor Gates William O'Hara Steven Younis LEGAL DISCLAIMERS: ----------------- Superman and all related characters, locations, and events are copyright and trademark DC Comics. Use of the aforementioned is not intended to challenge said ownership. We strongly suggest that each reader look to the media sources mentioned within for further information. All original material published in The Kryptonian Cybernet, including but not limited to reviews, articles, and editorials, are copyright 1997 by The Kryptonian Cybernet and the respective authors. Reprinting in any format is expressly forbidden without the permission of The Kryptonian Cybernet and the contributing author. Opinions presented within this issue belong to the authors of the articles which contain them. 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These archives can also be reached via the Kryptonian Cybernet Homepage: http://www.ms.uky.edu/~sykes/kc ______________________________________________ SUPERSCRIPTS: Notes from the Editor ------------------------------------ SELLING SUPERMAN The Superman titles are each currently selling between 50 and 60 thousand copies per month in the direct market, though still just above what they were selling before the new costume debuted. A recent "Watch This Space" in DC's books mentioned that newsstand sales are up 115% since the debut of the new costume. Without more information, though, I have no idea what that means in number of issues sold. Even though these numbers have probably spiked a bit as a result of SUPERMAN RED/SUPERMAN BLUE, it's still clear to me that Superman just is not selling today the way that he could, or should, be. When ranked by volume sold, Superman titles have been mired in the low-twenties to upper-thirties. Among DC's other titles, only JLA consistently outsells the Superman books, but there are a slew of Marvel and Image books consistently beating Superman. This isn't right. Why doesn't Superman sell better? What can be done to improve his standing? Let's start with the easier approach -- what can we do to better sell Superman comics to the current comic-buying public? I actually think it would be quite easy to increase sales to X-Men/Spawn levels, but it would require several changes, and perhaps a bit of profit-margin sacrifice on DC's part. So what would I do if I were in charge? 1. LOSE THE TRIANGLES. Remember that I'm talking sales here, and not personal preference. We've discussed this issue before, and I still believe that the current format hinders the growth of the Superman readership and prevents the acquisition of major talent on the titles. The recent reshufflings indicate the seriousness of this problem, I think. David Michelinie decided to stop writing ACTION COMICS, and an unproven writer was given the task. I like Stuart Immonen as much as anyone, but the fact is that he simply didn't have much experience under his belt in the writing department. Next, Roger Stern decides to step down from MAN OF TOMORROW, and Louise Simonson decides to lighten her load. So who steps into new writing duties? Jon Bogdanove, another artist. In fact, once this change takes place, the Superman writing staff will consist of Louise Simonson and four artists -- Jurgens, Immonen, Bogdanove, and Kesel. (Kesel entered the business as an inker.) This isn't meant to disparage their abilities -- Jurgens has been quite good of late, and Kesel's one of the better writers in the business. However, isn't it suspicious that in looking for writers, we keep turning not just to artists, but to artists already a part of the Super-team? Why aren't established writers being brought into the fold? 2. LOSE THE CURRENT CREATORS. Some of the current crop are currently doing some really nice things (Jurgens as writer, Immonen and Grummett as artists, for example). Karl Kesel seems to be in a touch of a slump on ADVENTURES, but his track record warrants having faith. However, many fans are simply tired of parts of the current creative team, and it would probably be best to start fresh than to pick and choose. 3. GO AFTER SOME BIG GUNS. With a fervor. Try to rope in some big name writers -- Morrison, Waid, Busiek, etc. More importantly, go after some big name artists. Today's market seems to be more art-driven than writer-driven. That is, the younger comic book reader (who supposedly still has the biggest pull -- we've gotta remember that the net tends to not be representative of the general audience) tends to pick up the best art. We don't have to go for all the scratchy, overblown art that seems to be so popular at Image, but there are some very talented artists who could sell Superman. Sean Chen, who drew the SUPERMAN ANNUAL this year, and who's now drawing the new IRON MAN. I'd love to see a Superman title drawn by Jim Lee or Alan Davis. Chris Sprouse's work is popular on SUPREME. And then there's a slew of "classic" artists who could also fit the bill. To get this talent would require some effort, though, and ending the triangle continuity would just be a start. First, you'd probably have to throw some money at 'em, resulting in the shrinking profit margins I mentioned above. Second, give them their space and let them do what they do best. If *they* come up with a story too big for their own book, let *them* decide whether or not to do a big crossover. We should no longer mandate the big crossover -- they should only happen as a story warrants it. 4. MAKE IT AFFORDABLE. I've been told that the volume on the Superman books is the only reason they're not charging $2.50 an issue, which is the standard for the glossy format they use. Well, if we can sell $2.50 books for $1.95, then we should be able to sell $1.95 books for $1.50. I'd take every Superman title and knock it down to the so-called Standard Format -- the same format in which SUPERMAN ADVENTURES, GREEN LANTERN, FLASH, and many others are currently sold at $1.95. However, with the volume working in our favor, we should be able to drop those prices to $1.50, thereby increasing sales tremendously. Imagine the entire set of Superman books -- within the main continuity -- all priced at $1.50. The titles would now cost a total of $6.00 a month instead of $8.00. Not only would it allow some to pick up the books for the first time, but it would also allow current readers to try out something new, perhaps giving DC a new reader on another title... An alternative would be to increase the page count of each issue to 40, and make most of that new advertising. I know that ads can be annoying, but it's gotta be worth it to make the books more affordable. Besides, comics have less ad content than anything else you can find on the racks these days. Have you checked out any magazines lately? I'll admit there's a possibility this wouldn't work, but it would be because of another reason all together, and one that I really hope is not the case. Is it possible that our society has become so cynical and jaded that it won't support a moral, ethically-driven hero? Could it be that we've *sunk* below the standards of Superman, and so reject him? The Big Boy Scout. This used to be a compliment of the Man of Steel, but these days it's often used in a mocking or disparaging manner. The most popular comics character today is an agent of Hell who has no problem with maiming and killing his enemies. Perhaps the most popular of the popular X-Men is Wolverine, another character who often displays his dark side. When it's not violence that's selling, it's sex. One of Image's most popular books is GEN 13, which features a bunch of *teenagers* drawn like adult super-models in skimpy costumes. Another is WITCHBLADE, whose title character's costume is almost not there. This isn't to say that these things are all that populate the medium, but they *are* the things which seem to sell the most. And sex, violence, moral ambiguity, and lack of ethics are simply not attributes of the Man of Steel. In the end, it boils down to this. Superman is a morally strong character, overwhelmingly good, with a strict ethical code, while today's society appears to prefer heroes whose actions are often questionable. Does this make the marketing of the Man of Steel presently non-viable? I truly hope not, for it would be a sad commentary on "how far we've come." Jeff Sykes, Editor ______________________________________________ RATINGS AT A GLANCE: Titles shipped November 1997 ----------------------------------------------------- Prepared by Shane Travis (travis@sedsystems.ca) Key: ---- Issue -- Issue for which 'Current' Rating and Rank are calculated. The 'Previous' columns refer to the issue immediately prior to this. Rating -- Average Rating, in Shields (maximum rating is 5.0). The number in () indicates how many people submitted ratings. Rank -- The relative ranking of the book among the regularly-published Superman titles. Average -- Average of the ratings for this title over the indicated number of months, based on the book's cumulative average. Each month is weighted equally, regardless of the number of people rating the book that month. If this book is averaged over fewer months than the rest, the number of months is displayed in (). Current Previous Avg (6Mth) Title Issue Rating Rank Rating Rank Rating Rank ----- ----- ------ ------ ------ ------ ------ ------ Superman 131 4.1(11) 1 3.4(12) 3 3.40 4 Sup: Secret Files 1 3.7(11) -- -- -- -- -- JLA 14 3.7(7) 2 3.8(5) 2 3.72 2 Steel 46 3.4(5) 3 3.8(4) 1 3.65 3 Supergirl 17 3.4(8) 4 3.1(5) 6 3.38 5 Man of Steel 75 3.3(13) 5 3.1(11) 5 2.85 8 Superman Adv. 15 3.0(5) 6 2.8(3) 8 3.77 1 Green Lantern 94 3.0(9) -- -- -- -- -- Action Comics 741 2.6(10) 7 2.6(8) 9 3.17 6 Superboy 47 2.5(7) 8 2.9(6) 7 2.80 9 Adv. of Superman 554 2.3(11) 9 3.3(11) 4 2.95 7 SB and the Ravers 17 2.0(4) 10 1.6(4) 10 2.58 10 "God Bless Us, Every One!" SUPERMAN #131 (4.1 Shields, 1st overall) - What a nice Christmas present we all received from Dan Jurgens this month. Continuing his hot streak, Jurgens presents us with one of the best tales of pure villainy in quite some time, and shoots a Triangle Title to the top of the charts for the first time in over a year! "Marley was dead, in the beginning..." SATR #17 (2.0 Shields, 10th overall) - Unlike Marley, this title was quite alive in its beginning, but has shown deteriorating vital signs of late. Perhaps that's because it knows it hasn't got long to live.... Hopefully, we can remember this patient in its strong and vibrant youth, and not as the doddering wreck it became. "How the Grinch Stole Christmas" AoS #554 (2.3 Shields, -1.0 Shields) - Maybe it wasn't the Grinch, but *someone* made off with Kesel's writing abilities. Not even Grummett's art could save this one, as he's been as busy as an elf on December 24th and only had time to do the layouts. "Miracle on 34th St." SUPERGIRL #17 (3.4 Shields, +0.3 Shields, +2 ranks) - If you don't call sprouting huge flaming wings out of your backs a miracle, then you need to re-check your definition. Besides, who better to deliver a miracle then God himself, in the shape of a sweater-wearing kid? Information for 'Ratings at a Glance' and the ratings accompanying the monthly reviews of Superman comics are obtained from KC readers. Anyone interested in contributing may contact Shane Travis and will be added to the monthly mailing-list to receive a Ratings Form. ______________________________________________ NEWS AND NOTES -------------- HOLIDELAY Because I'll be away during the holidays, there's a good chance that January's Coming Attractions and Merchandise will be late. If you can't wait for this information, I'd suggest either picking up the next issue of PREVIEWS, which should be in comic stores by the end of the year, or visiting Mania magazine (http://www.mania.com/mania/), which already has the information on March comics. From the staff of The Kryptonian Cybernet, the very best wishes for you and your families during this holiday season! COMICS QUICK BITS In April 1995 and April 1996, DC and Marvel joined forces to bring us the Amalgam Universe, but it would appear that Amalgam will no longer be an annual event. The two companies recently announced that there would be *no* new Amalgam projects for April 1997. Due to printing problems, the special DCU HOLIDAY BASH II (originally scheduled for November 26) was canceled, and DC announced plans to resolicit the book for late 1998. However, DC managed to correct the printing problems by upgrading the book's paper format, and the HOLIDAY BASH will now be released (at the original price) this month. Kieron Dwyer (ELSEWORLDS' FINEST) is reportedly illustrating a new Elseworlds title for DC, tentatively called SUPERMAN: SON OF DARKSEID. More information on this project as it becomes available. Mike McAvennie, associate editor of the Superman titles and group editor of the Superman Family titles, was recently chosen to succeed KC Carlson as editor of the Legion of Super-Heroes books. No word, as yet, on whether this will affect his status on the Superman books. The word is that next year's annuals will all tie in to this year's JLA SECRET FILES origin story, as Starro the Conqueror invades over the course of the summer. From a purely business standpoint, you gotta give credit to DC on this one -- what better method to sell your annuals than by tying them into your most popular title? In additional annual news, rumor has it that annuals may be given to individual characters instead of to individual titles -- so Superman fans may have just one annual to buy instead of the usual four... MERCHANDISE UPDATE In the December Merchandise supplement, I listed two mugs that DC is offering in March. One of these was a white porcelain mug with a reprinting of the cover to THE BRAVE AND THE BOLD #28, the first appearance of the original Justice League of America. It has since been pointed out to me that Superman does not actually appear on that cover. The other mug featured a reprinting of last year's JLA #1, and I *do* know that featured the Man of Steel prominently! Incidentally, also available at that time is a third mug featuring the cover to ALL-STAR COMICS #3, the first appearance of the Justice Society of America. These are just the first in an entirely new line of DC mugs. Look for information on some more additions to this line in the coming months. WHICH-WAYS GO HIGH TECH Brilliant Digital Entertainment (BDE) and DC Comics recently announced an agreement to co-produce SUPERMAN MULTIPATH ADVENTURES, interactive computer-based serials featuring characters from DC Comics. The first titles will be released on CD-ROM and online in 1998. Multipath Adventures, called "Multipath Movies(TM)" by BDE, are three-dimensional, digitally animated stories, each with hundreds of plot alternatives (paths) that are influenced by the user, leading to multiple distinct conclusions. Each Multipath Adventure runs approximately the same length as a film or video, with changes in plot being made based upon character interaction by the viewer. BDE's proprietary software allows for seamless interactivity, whereby the story and graphics are uninterrupted by the user's decisions. Interactive decisions are requested on average every 30 to 45 seconds and, because the viewer's choices are reflected in real time, Multipath Adventures present a fast-moving narrative experience, like a combination of watching a film and playing a video game. DC will write original scripts for the Superman Multipath series, and will consult closely with BDE throughout the production process. Utilizing BDE's suite of proprietary software tools, the multiple serial episodes of Superman will be produced efficiently and cost effectively in order to meet the anticipated worldwide consumer demand for ongoing Superman Multipath Adventures. BDE's tools will also allow Superman to be produced in multiple languages in order to take advantage of the character's international popularity. "Since his first appearance in 1938, Superman has always been the Man of Tomorrow," states Paul Levitz, Executive Vice President and Publisher of DC Comics. "It's only fitting that we push the limits of technology in presenting his adventures for the digital age. Our partnership with Brilliant Digital Entertainment will take advantage of Superman's classic, narrative strength and the exploding world of online communication to create new ways of telling stories." LIKE SANDS THROUGH AN HOURGLASS... Kevin Smith (who wrote one of the earlier drafts of SUPERMAN LIVES), recently indicated on his View Askew website (http://www.viewaskew.com) that comedian Chris Rock (formerly of SATURDAY NIGHT LIVE) looks very likely to be cast as Jimmy Olsen in the forthcoming Superman film. Ain't It Cool News (http://www.ain't-it-cool-news.com) also reports that Tim Burton is in casting discussions with Oscar-winning actor Kevin Spacey (MIDNIGHT IN THE GARDEN OF GOOD AND EVIL). Spacey has played several cold, calculating characters in his career which indicate he could make a wonderful Lex Luthor. Cindy Pearlman's November 27 "The Big Picture" column in the Chicago Sun-Times mentioned that Tim Allen (HOME IMPROVEMENT) has talked with Burton about playing the villain Brainiac. Her column also mentions Courtney Cox (FRIENDS, SCREAM) as Lois Lane. I've also heard that the Courtney Cox casting was reported in a recent issue of VARIETY, but I've been unable to confirm this. So continues the soap opera saga of SUPERMAN LIVES. FINALLY NEW STAS TOYS! Toymania (http://www.toymania.com) reports that Kenner has recommitted to its line of toys based on the Superman and Batman animated series, and that we can expect new toys in the immediate future. Not only will the next assortment (including Supergirl, Metallo, and Bizarro) be released in the coming months, but Kenner also plans at least two new assortments to be released in 1998! Still, this is going to be the third year in a row that new assortments in a Superman toy line have hit the shelves in wide release immediately *after* the big holiday season. Kenner's got to get these toys out earlier if they expect them to sell. In related news, DC will be soliciting a SUPERGIRL ADVENTURES comic book special for March 1998, and the blurb for this book indicates that it comes in the wake of Supergirl's debut on the SUPERMAN animated series. Looks like the new Supergirl's just around the corner! (And check out the web edition of KC for a sneak peek at the character design for the animated Supergirl...) ______________________________________________ AND WHO DISGUISED AS... --------------------------------------------------------- A Column of Opinion by J.D. Rummel (rummel@creighton.edu) The Basement Columns, Part I [Standing in his basement, he opens box after box, sorting through each stack of magazines, the size of his task becoming more apparent. As he digs, the memories come rushing in and he embraces them like an old friend long missed. They are part of him, like his arms stretching down to his fingertips--without them he would be diminished, less capable.] Do you remember your first comic book? I'm not sure I do (mine, not yours). I think it was either a Gold Key _Phantom_, or a copy of _World's Finest_. I remember the painted _Phantom_ cover. The Ghost Who Walks was being attacked by big jungle cats while giant eyes in the background watched. The _World's Finest_ had a Swan cover depicting Superman running a machine that was clearly hurting Jimmy Olsen and Robin as Batman protested loudly, saying that Superman was killing them. I have the _World's Finest_, but have never seen _The Phantom_ issue despite years of casual searching. I don't know how comics grabbed me, what part of any child they grab, but they did sink deep. Some kids, most, probably, read them for a short while, then move on. I never made that break, not completely. I did tire of getting so many and over the years I lost the need to have a complete run of some title. I never did collect something just because it was hot or even critically acclaimed. I only collected the ones that I enjoyed reading. To this day I still read and buy comics. Not with the fevered enthusiasm of youth, in fact sometimes almost out of a sense of duty, but they are still part of my life. They shaped my upbringing, my thinking. I have discussed here before how comics molded my view of men and women, of crime and justice, and how I was both blessed and scarred by the impressions they made on my thinking. Partly because of comics I believe in truth, honesty and fair play. For years, partly because of comics, I believed that women should chase after muscular, heroic figures who rescue them. I was an innocent, and while I wasn't seduced, Dr. Wertham, I was certainly influenced. If we are alert, we can learn while living. A few years ago an aunt passed away, and her house was a cluttered mass of stuff collected and never straightened or inventoried. Somewhere in that house with all the old recipe magazines, dolls, antiques and junk, I began to see all the stuff that we accumulate in our lives. We collect it all for many reasons, but we can't take it with us, and instead it is left behind for others to deal with. While I don't anticipate dying anytime soon, I began to notice in my life what George Carlin calls "stuff." I have lots of stuff, and most of it I never use for anything more than a place to store dust. So, today I find myself in the basement of another Aunt's house, where I have stored those comics I have collected for thirty-plus years. I'm organizing them, pulling them off the shelves, checking what I have, preparing to liquidate some that no longer have emotional value to me. It is very hard, and I vacillate, moving piles from table to table trying to figure out just what I want to do. I don't want those early _Justice League_s anymore, do I? I mean, I never liked Mike Sekowsky's art. Ah... all those Silver Age _Green Lantern_s. I loved having mom read those to me. I pause at a pile to sit and re-read the Adams and O'Neil issues (I'm missing the first two) and the beauty of the page still strikes me. The writing is no longer the provocative, cutting edge that it was in '72, but neither is it embarrassing. Rather, it is like many first steps, unsteady, but hinting at great journeys to come. I've been lucky, lots of folks haven't had a chance to keep their comics over a thirty-plus year span. Others sold theirs years ago. I bought some of mine from such folks. Anyway, I'm working in my basement, separating the ones I intend to sell from those I must keep for emotional reasons. Over the next few columns I will be examining the magazines in my basement and sharing with you some of things I see and feel. Hope you're there. Away! And Who Disguised As... is copyright 1997 by J. D. Rummel. Its contents may not be reproduced in any format without the written permission of the author. ______________________________________________ HOW IT ALL BEGAN ---------------------- by Yosef Shoemaker It was 1933 and we were in the depths of the great Depression. The world was full of cruel injustices, and in Europe war seemed imminent. I wondered, what would *I* do if I could make things better? What would I do if I weren't so meek and mild, and if I were stronger than anyone else on Earth? --Jerry Siegel I imagine most every Superman fan knows that Superman was created by Jerry Siegel and Joe Shuster some time in the 1930s. This article will attempt to chronicle that historic process of creation. This article is based on the following sources: * The interview with Jerry Siegel and Joe Shuster published originally in _Nemo_ #2 [1983] and reprinted in _Comic Values Monthly Special_ #2 [1992] * Jerry Siegel's article in _Action Comics_ #544 * The program to the 1st DC Comics Convention * Les Daniels' _DC Comics: 60 Years of the Worlds Favorite Comic Book Heroes_ [I have lifted many phrases verbatim from this invaluable and enjoyable book.] * _Fifty Who Made DC Great_ [DC, 1985] * Robert Beerbohm's "The First Superman Cover," from _Comic Buyers Guide_ #1165 [3/15/96] * Superman Homepage For the sake of brevity and clarity, I have quoted people without mentioning the source of the quote. Every time you see, So-and-so said, please mentally add the words, in an interview (or article). ************ Jerry Siegel and Joe Shuster were both born in 1914, Siegel in Cleveland and Shuster in Toronto. Shuster said that he moved to Cleveland when he was about 10, and that he and Siegel were about 16 when they met. Using the mimeograph machine at Glenville High school, from which they were later graduated, they started a fanzine called "Science Fiction." It was published from 1932-1933 and lasted six issues. Shuster said that it was sub-titled, The Advance Guard of Future Civilization. Siegel said that he was the editor and that Shuster was the art editor. In the third issue, dated January 1933, there was a story written by Siegel entitled "Reign of the Superman." It had been written in 1932. It was illustrated by Shuster. The Superman it featured was a villain with enhanced mental powers. Siegel said, "A couple of months after I published this story it occurred to me that a Superman as a hero rather than a villain might make a great comic-book character... Joe and I drew it up as a comic book--this was in early 1933." They prepared this full-length comic book story for Chicago's Humor Publishing Company, (described by some as) a "fly-by-night" publisher with representatives in Cleveland. Their comic was 9 x 12-and-a-half inches, with a finished cover depicting The Superman saving a man from an armed criminal. Shuster said that "The Superman was not a costumed figure. He wore only a T-shirt and pants. He was just a man of action. [He was] a character of goodwill." Siegel said, "Joe and I [ ] seem to recall some scenes there in which the character had a [ ] cape." Although "Superman" was not an alien at this point, the blurb from a rough pencil sketch of an alternate cover described him as a "genius," a "Hercules," and a "nemesis to wrong-doers," implying that he was already a super-powered crusader for good. This same cover depicts "Superman" shrugging off a bullet attack. Siegel said that Humor had been interested at first, but ultimately reneged. Siegel said that Shuster was so upset he ripped up his artwork; he burned everything except the cover. Siegel said that in 1934, he decided to make Superman a comic strip character. He then went on to say, "Late one night, it was so hot I had trouble falling asleep. I passed the time by trying to come up with dramatic story elements for the comic strip. These included Superman's birth on Krypton, his being sent to Earth, and his being raised to help people." He said, "Excitedly, I got out of bed and wrote that down. Yawning, I went back to bed and fell asleep. I awoke a little later. More ideas came to me. These included Superman's dual identity." Siegel added, "...the concept came to me that [] in one of his [two] identities he could be meek and mild [] and wear glasses." Siegel said, "Very early the next morning, I didn't bother to eat, I ran all the way, twelve blocks, to Joe's apartment...Joe read the script. Instant approval." Shuster said that they worked all day long. Siegel was one of the first to portray an alien as a benevolent being. Siegel wanted the character to be "glamorous and unique," so considerable care was taken with the costume. Tights seemed vaguely futuristic and were often used in science fiction illustrations. A cape was added to help give the effect of motion. They used the primary colors, thinking of the colors in the Sunday comics, because, as Shuster said, "they were the brightest colors we could think of." Shuster said that the costume was inspired by the Fairbanks costume pictures. Shuster also said that he had a heraldic crest in mind when he drew the insignia. He also said that he had classical heroes in mind, also, which is why the early Superman wore sandals. Shuster said that Siegel came up with all of the names; the name Clark Kent he derived from Clark Gable and Kent Taylor. Siegel said that Zorro's dual identity motif definitely had an influence. He said that Tarzan and Popeye were also influential. Siegel said that most comics editors couldn't have cared less about Superman. He said that certain offers and suggestions from various companies were either turned down or never came to fruition The Superman comic strips were now at the McClure Syndicate. Sheldon Mayer, an editor at the McClure Syndicate, had tried unsuccessfully to get his boss, Maxwell Charles (M.C.) Gaines, an agent at McClure, to believe in the success-potential of the strip. Mayer said, "When the Superman strip first came in, I immediately fell in love with it. The syndicate rejected it about fifteen times." Siegel said that DC was considering features for a new comic. Harry Donenfeld (or Jack Liebowitz) of DC had asked Gaines for new material for this new comic: _Action Comics_. (Donenfeld had bought DC in 1937, and Liebowitz was his business partner.) Mayer said, "I was singing Superman's praises so much that in 1938 Gaines finally took the strip up to [ ] Donenfeld." (It would later be said: M.C. Gaines brought Superman to the attention of Harry Donenfeld at the urging of Sheldon Mayer.) Siegel says that he gave Gaines permission to forward Superman and others of his comic strips to DC. The strips were sent to DC editor Vin Sullivan. Siegel said that Sullivan liked Superman most of all and would publish it. "It looked different," Sullivan said, and he attributes to himself "just good luck, or maybe a little bit of foresight." Sullivan says he had Siegel and Shuster cut the strips apart to make them into comic book pages. Liebowitz called the decision to run the strip "a pure accident" based on availability of material at deadline. The rest is history. ______________________________________________ RISING ABOVE LIMITATIONS -------------------------------------- by Enola F. Jones (sj1025@gte.net) Disabilities fascinate me. Perhaps it's because I went blind for a day when I was ten years old, or maybe because my best friend is very hard-of-hearing, but I have always liked stories where familiar characters are disabled and must cope with their new limitations. I found no dearth of stories in this vein in the Superman family of comics. I was always on the lookout for Red Kryptonite, as it would do wonky things to Superman and other Kryptonians. Usually, though not always, it involved a handicap. One of my favorites in this vein was a Superboy story from the early eighties where Red K blinded Superboy until he put on his Clark Kent glasses. Then he could see and perform all his vision powers. That led to a priceless scene with Lana Lang where he pretended to be Clark pretending to be Superboy. Lana snatches off his glasses and he freaks, still in milksop character. Pete Ross, knowing his identity, helps with the story and between his pleas and Clark's panic, Lana gives the glasses back, declaring Superboy wouldn't act like THAT. But as Clark walks off, Pete realizes he didn't focus his eyes when the glasses were off and he really is blind. Under the "Never Seen It But Man I Wish I Had" category is a story I read a synopsis of in _The Superman Encyclopedia_. It was another Red K story where the insidious K had upped Superman's hearing so that even the footsteps of an ant caused him unbearable pain. The only solution was to wear a helmet that rendered him stone deaf. Another story I thoroughly enjoyed was one I read in a digest. I have no idea where it came from, but according to Curt Swan's art style I'd say it was late sixties or early seventies. It was the flip side of the Superboy story related above. Clark was on assignment to research a scientific breakthrough: new radiation, the purpose of which I can't recall. The side-effect of it, however, was that it gave off such a brilliant light it blinded the animals it came in contact with by paralyzing their optic nerves. Clark was watching a demonstration of it wearing protective goggles, but the goggles were old and the strap snapped right when the light blazed. Clark had to pretend he was blinded, to protect his identity. He lost his job and nearly lost his home. Lois (I think) declared her love for him, but he snapped that she pitied him and he didn't want that. So Clark Kent faded from sight and Superman was trying to forge new secret identities. (I think he should have stuck with Clark, as a blind man would be perfect cover. Ah well...) Eventually, however, the scientists announced the blindness in the rats was only temporary, so Clark's sight conveniently returned and he got his old position back. All was once again right with the world. Superman wasn't the only one that endured disabilities. In a _Superman Family_ book from 1976 or 78 (the last letter is unreadable) Lois Lane has finished a demonstration of how a guide dog works. As she is walking home, she is discussing with Jimmy a trial she is testifying in. Suddenly a robbery happens in front of them and one of the hoods shoots at Lois. The bullet grazes her nose, and sears her corneas. She goes blind within the hour. She puts up a brave front, even getting Lucy to help her with some carnival props. However, Superman discovers the truth and Lois finally admits she needs help. She gets the guide dog she worked with, and is quickly kidnapped by the gang of the man she is testifying against. Superman rescues her, and she undergoes a cornea transplant, the corneas in question being those of a murderer. Soon after, she begins seeing visions of people with horrified looks on their faces. Convinced she is going mad, she does research and finds they are all victims of the man whose corneas she now has. But a little more research makes her suspicious. At the trial, Lois is on the witness stand when another vision strikes. But this time Superman collars a spectator to the trial and Lois spills the whole scheme. The man Superman is holding, as well as Lois' eye doctor and a few others, are all members of the gang of the man she is testifying against. To destroy her credibility, they staged that robbery and deliberately blinded her. But she would have regained her sight in a matter of days. The transplant was faked. While she was under, the bogus doctor slipped on thin contact lenses painted with a picture of the murdered man's (who, incidentally, they murdered) victims. Another member of the gang would shine a special light into her face to make the portrait visible. She removed one of the lenses and demonstrated this to the judge. One of the perpetrators asks her how she found out and she tells him the murderer shot all his victims in the back, so he would never have seen the looks of terror so expertly portrayed in her visions. All is normal again. (By the by, the man she was testifying against was found guilty.) I have written a story where Jimmy was blinded, but I don't think that counts. I can't recall one story in the lexicon where Jimmy was handicapped. Or Perry or Lana. If anybody out there can tell me of one, please let me know. Watching Superman and Lois getting disabled and rising above their temporary limitations makes for a wonderful read. Always it seems they learn something from their experiences. Usually this lesson is that what we call normalcy can never be taken for granted, because someday it could be taken away. That is a good lesson for us all. ______________________________________________ NEW COMIC REVIEWS ----------------- Completists alert: There were three Superman-related titles in November which are not reviewed in this issue. Superman played a small role in JLA: PARADISE LOST #2; Superman and Superboy both appeared in LEGION OF SUPER-HEROES #100; and, of course, THE KENTS #6 focused on Clark's human ancestors. Ratings Panelists: AHu: Andrew Hudson DWd: Darrin Wood LF: Lawrence Faulkner AW: Anatole Wilson ES: Emmanuel Soupidis MS: Mike Smith CoS: Cory Strode EJ: Enola Jones RG: Rene' Gobeyn DC: David Chappell GN: G.M. Nelson ST: Shane Travis DJ: Derek Jackson JO: Joey Ochoa TD: Thomas Deja DR: Daniel Radice JSy: Jeff Sykes VV: Vic Vitek As always, the first rating given after the average is that of the reviewer. The average rating given for each book may correspond to a larger sample of ratings than what is printed following the average. =================================================== THE SUPERMAN TITLES: ------------------- 1. SUPERMAN: THE MAN OF STEEL #75 Jan 1998 $1.95 US/$2.75 CAN "The Death of Mr. Mxyzptlk" Writing & Drawing: Jon Bogdanove Kibitzing: Louise Simonson Inking: Dennis Janke Lettering: Ken Lopez Coloring: Glenn Whitmore Computer Seps: Digital Chameleon Bereaved: Maureen McTigue Good as Dead: Joey Cavalieri Cover: Jon Bogdanove, Dennis Janke and Patrick Martin RATINGS Average: 3.3/5.0 Shields MS: 4.5 Shields DC: 3.0 Shields - Fun and moderately good story, but Mxy is too friendly with Clark these days. DJ: 0.1 Shields - This is the worst Superman comic I've ever read. It was poorly written, and just as poorly drawn. The story was uninspired, and a big letdown considering all the publicity DC was giving it. The art looks like it was done by a five year old. C'mon guys! DWd: 3.9 Shields - The first time I have actually laughed out loud while reading a Superman comic. This is how Mxy stories SHOULD be! EJ: 3.5 Shields - This one was so funny! I had to stop reading it three times just to catch my breath! For me the best scene was the one at the very end with the foldout panel. I actually started to miss the little bugger, then started laughing all over again! GN: 1.5 Shields - The story was only fair -- not worth the hype -- and Bog's art brought it further down. JSy: 4.7 Shields - Not quite as good as the last Mxy appearance in MOS, but a wonderful read nonetheless. Bog and company *really* know how to make this character work. TD: 2.5 Shields - What was the point of this, other than to prove that Bogdanove loves drawing Mxy? For those of you wondering, this is the reason I applied for this job. _Man of Steel_ #56 was easily the most critically acclaimed issue of the series, offering a popular new take on our favorite imp from the 5th Dimension. It doesn't take a genius to see that putting him in #75 couldn't miss, and I wanted to be part of it. Lois and Clark happen upon Mr. Mxyzptlk attending a funeral (with popcorn) trying to get a better understanding of death. Realizing that the Death of Superman (tm) did wonders for his P.R., Mxy resolves to kill himself in a similar fashion. Creating a monster named Badabingbadaboomsday to do the honors, he prepares to sacrifice his life to stop the creature. The Doomsday parody is too close to the original, so it ignores Mxyzptlk to attack Superman. Determined to keep Supes from hogging the glory again, the imp renounces his powers and tries to get himself killed in the fray. Although Mxy never gets a scratch, his beloved popcorn is destroyed in the conflict, never to be seen again. He realizes the analogy to death just in time for Emil Hamilton to arrive and explain everything to Lois. It seems that the only way to stop Badabingbadaboomsday is for Superman to expend all of his energy, thereby killing himself and ending the simulation of the original Doomsday menace. Horrified by that prospect, Mxyzptlk charges once more into the battle, desperately trying to get the monster's attention. Finally, with some popcorn induced flatulence (he's mortal now, after all), he incurs the monster's wrath. B-Day kills Mxyzptlk with one blow, which destroys itself as well. Tumbling through the Great Beyond, Mxy finds himself in the office of God, a.k.a. Superman Group Editor Mike Carlin. Back in Metropolis, Superman, Lois, Hamilton, and the creative team of MAN OF STEEL look on in astonishment at the live -- albeit naked -- body of Mxyzptlk. This one lived up to my expectations perfectly. Bogdanove's cartoony style worked like a charm for this gag-a-minute script where nothing was sacred. (Mxy giggles at Superman's new costume, and asks him if it comes in red.) I would have complained about Emil Hamilton's all too convenient appearance and explanation, but Mxy beats me to it ("Doesn't it bother you that your whole life is just one big expositional plot device?"). Beyond that, my only problem with this issue is the somewhat rushed job Bog does in some places, particularly Lois Lane, who looked a little too much like Agent Scully this time around. Jon makes up for it with the scene in Carlin's office, littered with Superman memorabilia, complete with a poster by Dan Jurgens. Bog apes his style, a la the "Batmen" cover of #37, reminding us that he can do more than cartoony imps and caricatures of the boss. Superman almost takes a back seat in this one, although he still gets some powerful visuals fighting Badabingbadaboomsday, as well as the moment where he realizes he may die by one of Mxy's pranks. Despite his fear, he is prepared to sacrifice himself--showing us in one page what he's all about. It's nice to see some of that has rubbed off on Mxyzptlk. I was worried at first about Jon Bogdanove taking over the writing duties on _Man of Steel_, but this issue proves that the future arrangement of the creative team can do funny, at the very least. I look forward to seeing what else they can do. This is a fun comic that had me laughing out loud, pure and simple. Janke's inks are back up to their normal quality. I can't understand how he can produce decent harmony with Bogdanove's pencils, but falls flat with nearly every guest penciller to date (see Scott Eaton's run in #69-74). At least they're together again, so things are back up to snuff for now. It worked for love in #56, now death this time around. One wonders what will happen when Mxyzptlk learns about tax returns and acne in MAN OF STEEL #100. Whatever it is, I'm sure it'll be a blast. Mike Smith =================================================== 2. SUPERMAN #131 Jan 1998 $1.95 US/$2.75 CAN "Checkmate" Writer: Dan Jurgens Artists: Ron Frenz and Joe Rubinstein Letterer: John Costanza Separations: Digital Chameleon Colorist: Glenn Whitmore Assistant Ed.: Maureen McTigue Editor: Joey Cavalieri Cover: Ron Frenz, Joe Rubinstein, and Patrick Martin Special Thanks to Tom Christopher RATINGS Average: 4.1/5.0 Shields TD: 4.3 Shields AHu: 5.0 Shields - This was an excellent story -- one of the best that I have read for quite a while. I can now almost sympathise with Lex, and the way that he got revenge on his step-father was very cold. DJ: 4.8 Shields - Wow! A great story, with an interesting look into Luthor's past. The ending of the story is superb. EJ: 3.0 Shields - The glimpses into Luthor's past were nicely done. I feel now as if I understand him better. That's why his treatment of the Contessa was at once chilling and yet completely in character. ES: 4.4 Shields - This one issue could be my fave of the year! At long last Lex Luthor is the meanest S.O.B. in the DC Universe, and it shows in spades. I was expecting squishiness galore with Lena's birth, but it was Lex at his best! GN: 3.3 Shields - Nice insight into Luthor, whose evil has rarely been shown as clearly. He probably shouldn't be totally absolved by the public after his trial; Look at O.J., and he was acquitted too. JO: 4.5 Shields - Just when I think there's a small part of Luthor I could actually feel for, he proves I'm wasting my time. Truly the mark of a great villain. VV: 4.9 Shields - Berkowitz' assassination came completely out of left field, and while Luthor's double-cross of the Contessa didn't, I am expecting that the Contessa had something ready for just such an emergency; we haven't seen the last of her yet. I have a theory that every artist, no matter how bad, has one great work in him or her; it's just a matter of time before it emerges. Dan Jurgens--who, though improving in the last year or so, is mediocre at best--has come awful close to producing his one great work of art. In fact, he came awfully close two months ago with "Within Human Reach", his portrait of the Cyborg in _Superman_ #129. This month, Jurgens comes closer yet, although "Checkmate" is a great story for a reason other than the reason I suspect he thinks we'll think it's a great story. I'll give you a second to stop your head from spinning. "Checkmate" is all about Lex Luthor--so much so that the brief scenes with Sparky the Wonder Kryptonian are extraneous. On the day of the birth of Luthor's new child, he decides to help Mayor Berkowitz launch an anti-crime campaign in the Simon Project district. While Perry relates to Lois a childhood tale of Lex's fascination with a fellow foster child (tying this tale neatly in with the fantastic James Hudnall one-shot--and inspiration for the X-FILES episode "Musings of a Cigarette Smoking Man"--THE UNAUTHORIZED BIOGRAPHY OF LEX LUTHOR), we see how Lex has set up a scheme that culminates right that second, a scheme that puts the city in more disarray than ever, and allows him to keep it 'safe' for his progeny. Now I think Jurgens wants us to be horrified by what Luthor does while also understanding a bit of what makes this character so horrific. If you ask me, it works so well because it shows us exactly why Luthor is the ultimate opposition for Supes. In this story, we see Luthor pretty much from his viewpoint: a man of such overwhelming ambition that he thinks nothing of planning a revenge that literally takes decades to enact...as long as it ultimately advances his own goals. As portrayed here, he is incapable of human emotions; people are resources, and nothing more. Some of the steps taken are bone-chilling in their ruthlessness -- particularly the penultimate page, where Lex wraps up the loose ends involved with the birth of the new Luthor. This story must have really inspired Jurgens, because even his dialogue-- something about which I've raged in the past--is pretty spot on, with only a few exceptions (the flashback stuff is downright painful to read because it's all hysteria and high notes, without a touch of subtlety). I doubt that Jurgens could keep up this quality from month to month, but it's my sincere hope that the level of storytelling will remain close to this in the future, especially during this Superman Red/Superman Blue froforah. "Checkmate" would have gotten an even higher rating if it wasn't for the lackluster art job. Frenz doesn't seem comfortable with this type of psychological story, so most of his linework is primitive and sketchy. In many spots, his art is so by-the-book that Joe Rubinstein's inks totally overpower it, creating an effect that is very similar to bad Sal Buscema--I had to keep flipping back to the title page to make sure Sal (one of my least favorite pencillers) had nothing to do with this book. Except for the artwork, _Superman_ #131 is as good as the core titles get these days, telling a story that justifies Lex Luthor's standing in the Superman Rogues Gallery. It's interesting that Jurgens of late has been hitting more than he's missing; I sincerely hope he's learning, and that we'll soon be able to look upon "Checkmate" as the first in a great run of stories. Thomas Deja =================================================== 3. THE ADVENTURES OF SUPERMAN #554 Jan 1998 $1.95 US/$2.75 CAN "Children And Monsters" Words: Karl Kesel Layouts: Tom Grummett Finishes: Denis Rodier & Scott Koblish Letters: Albert De Guzman Colors: Glenn Whitmore Separations: Digital Chameleon Assistant: Maureen McTigue Monster: Joey Cavalieri Cover: Tom Grummett, Denis Rodier, and Patrick Martin RATINGS Average: 2.3/5.0 Shields DR: 2.8 Shields (Story) 2.4 Shields (Art) DJ: 3.2 Shields - Pretty good; a typical Superman vs. Monster story. I am really beginning to hate Thompson, which is definitely intended by the writers, so they're doing a good job. I hope this is a lead-in to a much bigger story. EJ: 1.3 Shields - Boring. Predictable. From the second I saw Thompson I knew what would happen. The scene with Lena and Lex at the start was the only good point in this snorefest. ES: 2.2 Shields - The best part of this Ripper story-arc is that it's over. Why must we sit through these dime-store threats week after week? JO: 3.5 Shields - Nice recovery in terms of story from the last time we saw the Ripper. This new angle with Thompson is very interesting. JSy: 2.1 Shields - Decent art from Grummett and friends, but it seemed a bit rushed. However, I saw absolutely no purpose in this story, which was little more than a rehash of a tale from last year. Since when did Karl Kesel start repeating himself? VV: 2.0 Shields - Ehhh. A letdown after the previous two issues. I don't think the Ripper (kidnapper) has been truly revealed, and I'm getting very tired of "Hunter" Thompson. Why not just drop him in Africa where he can hunt to his heart's content, or at least until he runs out of ammo . Did you know that each page of the average Superman book costs you 8.8 cents (12.5 cents Canadian)? Isn't that a Super-deal? Couple that with the fact that the book stars Superman himself, and we're talking a fanTAStic deal, right? Well, one must consider the artwork, the story, and of course, the characters involved. Let's see if this book is worth a dime per page... Ooh! The comic opens with Superman laying waste to a renegade LexCorp "Metal Monster" (Couldn't somebody come up with a better name?) Swooping down from the sky, in a nice opening splash page, he makes quick work of the robot. Lex Luthor appears, thanking Superman for his efforts, and inviting him inside to see his new daughter Lena. Down on street level, specifically Suicide Slum, the "Ripper" chooses his next victim. Meanwhile in the Mayor's office, newly elected interim Mayor Sackett and representatives from the Metropolis Special Crimes Unit discuss, ironically enough, how to handle the 'Ripper' situation. Their solution? Seek help from Burton "Hunter" Thompson, monster specialist, and winner of the "I Couldn't Come Up With A Good Costume So I Wore This Stuff I Found" award. For the media, the hunt is on for a picture of Luthor's new daughter, with the first printable photo of the child receiving $5000. Another daughter, on the other hand, has run away, and Dirk Armstrong is still deeply saddened by Ashley's disappearance. Superman does a little hunting of his own, along with the S.C.U. and Burton Thompson. They eventually find the Ripper, and a subsequent rescue of his captive occurs! The issue ends with a reminder/revelation of where the Ripper actually came from... You've read the summary, now taste my mighty comments! Looking at this issue, we see quite a few plots and sub-plots going on. We have: "Luthor's Baby", the "Ripper", "New Mayor", runaway Ashbury and Scorn, the "Photo Contest", the "Fate of the Contessa", "Superman's Reminder that he's not Genetically Compatible with Humans", and the "Evil that Lurks Beneath Star Labs". Do these ALL have to be going on at one time? Sigh. Things are more like a soap opera. I sure hope we don't find out Lois Lane is really dead and Clark married her twin... Kesel juggles these little subplots with masterful ease, but I'm beginning to really hate the current set-up of the books. Poor Karl has to deal with all those side stories and only has 2 or 3 pages for his own. When are we going to get to see an independent tale within AOS like Jurgens' gets, quite often I might add, in _Superman_? Karl deserves more than being the janitor of the super-team. Let him write. It's what he does best. This month we're treated to something wonderful: A New Inker! Scott Koblish does a great job, compared to what we're used to, inking Grummett's pencils. Actually Koblish did "finishes", which are much more than just "inks", but he still did a better job on Tom's pencils in his first shot than Denis Rodier has done in his whole run. If we can't get Doug Hazlewood back, might as well sign this guy up. He's FAR better than Rodier. Heck, my dog with a marker in his mouth is better than Denis Rodier. Of course, Grummett isn't actually doing pencils this issue. Once again, he's doing layouts. What with _Superboy_, _Silver Surfer_ and _Adventures of Superman_, poor Tom is taxed. I miss the old days of the Superman books, when Tom and Doug Hazlewood would dazzle me week after week with clean, defined, and nicely-organized pages. Not this slop. Tom is rushing to put these issues out. This isn't to say that I thought this issue of _Adventures of Superman_ was bad, which is far from what I mean. It's just that it's not at the regular Kesel/Grummett standards (I shall ignore Rodier) that I've learned to love. It's like _Seinfeld_'s current season; the episodes aren't up to par with previous episodes, but they're still better than other shows out there. This is a good issue as comic books go, but a bad issue in respect to what we have come to expect from Kesel and Grummett. Dan Radice ______________________________________________ THE SUPERMAN TITLES (cont): -------------------------- 4. ACTION COMICS #741 Jan 1998 $1.95 US/$2.75 CAN "A Cautionary Tale" (with apologies to Chaucer) Writer/Penciller: Stuart Immonen Inker: Jose Marzan Jr. Letterer: Bill Oakley Colorist: Glenn Whitmore Separations: Digital Chameleon Assistant: Maureen McTigue Troubador: Joey Cavalieri Cover: Stuart Immonen, Jose Marzan Jr., and Patrick Martin RATINGS Average: 2.6/5.0 Shields ST: 2.2 Shields GN: 3.2 Shields - Nice scenes with Luthor and his daughter, and a cute bit at the beginning with Lois and Clark. The main story seemed a bit by-the-numbers. Stuart and Jose's art seemed to be missing something this issue. JO: 2.0 Shields - This story took forever to get nowhere. The art was also bad. They shouldn't let someone (Immonen) who can't write and can't draw do both! JSy: 2.2 Shields - Gorgeous cover, and lovely interior art, and Immonen presents something refreshingly different in the Chanticleer tale. However, aside from the intriguing confrontation with Luthor, the Legion story was just plain boring. LF: 3.8 Shields - Another great turnout from Immonen and Kesel. Immonen continues to impress me as one of the best Superman artists of all time. TD: 2.0 Shields - As someone who doesn't read Legion, I could've done without the C.O.M.P.U.T.O. stuff. The scene where Luthor reminds Supes he can't have kids, however, was choice.... VV: 3.4 Shields - Legion fan here, so that earns it some extra points . Foreshadowing of Superman Red/Superman Blue in Chanticleer's tale, and some nice work with Superman and the Legion. Synopsis: "Legion Month" in the DC Universe. This means that we are forced to sit through meaningless guest-appearances of the Legion of Super-Heroes in titles where they do not belong, telling stories which are at best tangential, and at worst irrelevant to either the LSH or the character in whose book they are appearing. For anyone who doesn't regularly follow the exploits of the LSH, you'll have no clue what's going on. After all, if you want an explanation, go buy more of DC's products. Don'tcha just love Marketing Departments? As a quick re-cap: The LSH is a team of teen-age heroes from the 30th century. Due to an unfortunate accident, they have been trapped in the 20th century for quite some time. Brainiac 5, resident genius of the LSH, has been attempting to figure out how to get them home. One of his experiments was to create a super-computer by linking a Mother Box (from the Genesis cross-over) with a Responsometer (from the Metal Men). After successfully creating COMPUTO, Brainiac 5 took it apart for a while -- a state akin to death for a sentient computer. COMPUTO didn't like that at all, and vowed no one would ever do it to him again. He has been lashing out at his surroundings (including the Legion itself) ever since. That's where we come in. COMPUTO has taken over a set of tanks and starts razing downtown Metropolis (which was conveniently empty at the time -- apparently, no one works weekends in the Big Apricot). From there, he turns his attention to an air-show (which is attended by the daughters of the recently-assassinated Mayor Berkowitz) and causes planes to go haywire. The LSH and Superman save the day. ...Only it turns out that COMPUTO wasn't responsible for the tanks. Luthor, for some motivation known only to him and not shared with the readers, took the opportunity to blow up a significant portion of Metropolis and *blame* COMPUTO. Brainiac 5 and his 'advanced technology' manage to correlate all the information and finally get some hard evidence on Luthor when in a literal act of Deus ex Machina, Computo wipes it all for spite. Woven throughout this is an adaptation of Chaucer's "The Chanticleer's Tale" which Luthor is reading to his newborn daughter Lena. Luthor twists the interpretation so that it reads as a morality play in which Big Blue is the fox and Luthor himself is Chanticleer. Interestingly enough, it also fits if you reverse the roles. Oh, and two pages are wasted on Jimmy Olsen and the Runaway Gang. Opinions: The first word that came to mind as I read this comic was 'scattershot'. It seemed as though Immonen figured that if he could tell enough stories, at least one of them had to strike home. Unfortunately while buckshot covers a wide area, you don't tend to get much penetration depth -- which was exactly the problem with this issue. We are never really told, for example, why it is that Luthor sees fit to raze several city blocks of downtown Metropolis. Oh, certainly he gets the publicity of donating all that money... but wait! Sackett doesn't give out the names of the philanthropists! That means that nobody knows that Luthor is the benefactor. If he was going to do it all secretly, why not just buy the buildings and then do what he wants with them? Let's turn to the Berkowitz girls. After missing the funeral, the older sister, Julianna drives up while everyone is still in mourning. Furthermore, she doesn't seem the least bit apologetic or sad, but has a huge grin on her face. Then they go to see 'the last thing Dad ever did'... an air show that he started fifteen years ago. What has he been doing in the intervening time? Finally, while I'm all for not spoon-feeding the readership, the 'Booster Gold Incident' that Julianna refers to took place almost 150 issues--twelve years--ago. Kudos for remembering it at all, Stuart, but care to fill the rest of us in? While I was not happy about the Legion appearing at all, I will say that Stuart did a good job of their characterizations. Unfortunately, I can't say as much for Superman. From learning how to supinate his wrist to totally losing his cool with Luthor, something about Ma Kent's boy just seemed wrong. While I applaud the style and technique Immonen used in Chanticleer's Tale, and marvel at the breathtakingly perfect illustrations accompanying it (with hats off to Whitmore for the excellent colorations), I think that this was the wrong place and time. In a book already filled with a half-dozen guest stars and as many plotlines, the 3 1/2 pages taken by the Tale could probably have been put to better use. Furthermore, an intriguing device such as this should not be wasted on a throwaway. I would have loved to see an entire book devoted to Luthor reading Lena some children's stories, and putting his own unique spin on things. Imagine the things that could be done with pastiches of Curious George, Peter Rabbit and Dr. Seuss! Oh, and two pages are wasted on Jimmy Olsen and the Runaway Gang. Shane Travis ______________________________________________ SUPER-FAMILY TITLES: ------------------- STEEL #46 Jan 1998 $1.95 US/$2.75 CAN "Bori" Writer: Priest Artists: Denys Cowan and Tom Palmer Letterer: Pat Brosseau Colorist: John Kalisz Asst. Editor: Maureen McTigue Editor: Mike McAvennie Cover: Cowan and Palmer RATINGS Average: 3.4/5.0 Shields JSy: 4.6 Shields AHu: 2.0 Shields - I didn't enjoy this at all. It was just too forced. The idea of Superboy and Natasha... Naaaa! GN: 1.8 Shields - Superboy's pursuit of Natasha seems to come out of left field. (He wants back with Tana, but keeps winding up with other girls.) Art was only so-so. JO: 3.7 Shields - A very well-written book. I enjoyed the insights into all of the characters. Art is O.K. but still too "sketchy" for me. MS: 4.8 Shields - The best issue of this series. This is the sort of stuff that made Steel my fav'rit nearly five years ago. Why are you still reading this? Go out and buy _Steel_ #46! What Has Come Before: Dr. Amanda Quick has struggled with her emotions for two men. One, Dr. John Irons -- AKA Steel -- is about the densest male on the planet, still not accepting her obvious feelings for him, and fighting his own emotions for her. The other, Dr. Sam Ellis -- AKA Skorpio -- triggers a deep desire inside Amanda, but she resists because Ellis is also an assassin for hire. Natasha Irons is a teenage girl just learning about her power over the opposite sex, and about what she wants and needs in a relationship. Paul (whom she calls Boris) is her closest companion, but it's unclear whether either of them sees the other as a romantic interest. We *do* know that Steel has learned that Paul is HIV positive. Synopsis: Amanda Quick has made a choice, and already she regrets it. Work serves as a feeble excuse for hurriedly leaving her apartment... and Dr. Ellis. In a later encounter at the hospital, Amanda explains that she can't live with Ellis' "second job," but they both realize that Irons is the true reason. Even if it takes forever to get it through his thick skull, she will wait for John. Meanwhile, Amanda's not the only one having to make choices. Following his dramatic appearance in last month's issue, Superboy appears on Nat's doorstep before school, ready and willing to begin their relationship. (If you'll recall, Nat used Superboy as an easy out when forced to choose between Paul and the Ice Cream Guy.) Superboy blames his super-heroic "job" for his break-up with Tana, and sees Natasha as a romantic interest who can better understand his situation, given that she is the niece of a hero. During the course of their after-school evening of theme parks and zoos -- though that's nothing like what you'd expect -- Superboy and Nat both come to realize that the Kid is still not over Tana, and that the two of them should not enter a relationship, at least for now. Steel *does* show up in his own book. He finally has a talk with Paul about the boy's condition, and perhaps comes to realize that he has nothing to fear. He also steals Superboy from Nat for a brief action-filled respite from the relationship themes, in which the two heroes prevent a train wreck from causing widespread catastrophe. Comments: Priest once again nicely illustrates how a super-hero book doesn't have to be filled with mindless slugfests and inane villains, and that the hero doesn't always have to take center stage. One of the more interesting aspects of this title under Priest and company is that the book is every bit as much about Natasha as it is about Steel, and the stories have not once suffered as a result. One of the techniques that Priest uses to relate his stories in _Steel_ (and more so in _Quantum and Woody_, his book from Acclaim) is short, often disjointed vignettes which require the readers to make the connections between scenes, to determine the flow of the story. I'll admit that it took me some time to get the hang of the style, but I've also discovered that it produces some of the best character development that I've seen in comics. The first rule of a visual art form is "Show, don't tell." -- a rule often violated by writers with no confidence in their artists. We can often learn more about the characters from a single illustration than we can from a page of dialogue, and this "jumpy" style allows for more of these types of scenes. Examples? A brief transitional scene shows a dressed John Irons at 7:30 AM, drinking coffee in front of a large monitor screen, presumably watching or reading the morning news. Another scene witnesses Dr. Sam Ellis playfully juggling two vials which, we have just discovered, contain enough of a toxin to kill everyone in the hospital. Natasha and a friend go swimming in the polar bear exhibit while Superboy pets the animals. Each scene speaks volumes about the characters' personalities. Of course, we can't live without dialogue. Priest always delivers in his dialogue, but there were two particular scenes in this issue which stood out. Each scene deals with Steel talking to a "Boris" about Natasha, but the scenes are played with completely different moods. When speaking with Paul about his being HIV positive, John is cautious, almost apologetic. It's clear he's just looking out for the safety of his niece, but he learns that Paul may be a lot more mature than John was giving him credit for. In fact, I'd go so far as to say that Priest makes Paul out to know more about women than does John. Priest takes a completely different route in Steel's conversation with Superboy, however, presenting a variation of the "gun-cleaning father" routine. Steel simply intimidates Superboy into a typical teenager, fumbling for the right words and seldom finding them. Priest handles Superboy very well here. He's got a typical teenage attitude, and he's reacting to his break-up with Tana much as a teenager would -- blaming the split on her not recognizing his "duty" as a hero, rather than realizing that he wasn't up to the maturity level that she needed. In addition to the stumbling conversational skills he displays around Steel, he's also fairly quick to defer to Steel's command, though not before firmly voicing his opinion. I've mentioned it before: Priest has a good handle on teenagers. While I wouldn't go so far as to say that Cowan and Palmer's art DEtracts from the story, I will say that it DIStracts from the story. It's not a quality problem though; the characters are well-proportioned, and their likenesses distinctive. Furthermore, Cowan has a good nose for layout and for dynamic action shots. The style, however, tends to be scratchy and sometimes angular -- in some ways, quite similar to the Bogdanove/Janke art in _Man of Steel_. This could be due to the inking, but since I've never seen Cowan with another inker, it's hard to say. Cowan will be finished by Sal Buscema next month, so I'll have more of a comparison by then. In the end, Priest and company have produced yet another quality issue of _Steel_, and they've been doing so for at least the past six months. Despite this, the sales continue to fall. We often complain about how so much garbage continues to be published while quality books are canceled because they don't "fit the mold." If the numbers don't rise in the next year, it's gonna happen again. Give _Steel_ a chance -- it's worth it! Jeff Sykes =================================================== SUPERBOY #47 Jan 1998 $1.95 US/$2.75 CAN "Idol Worship, Part 2" Writer: Ron Marz Pencils: Georges Jeanty Inks: Doug Hazlewood Letters: Starkings and Comicraft/AD Colors: Buzz Setzer Assistant: Maureen McTigue Sweating from the Heat: Mike McAvennie Cover: Tom Grummett and Doug Hazlewood RATINGS Average: 2.5/5.0 Shields RG: (No Rating Submitted) AHu: 2.0 Shields - Bummer. They spoilt the second part of this story. It seemed to rush by, what with the battles etc. ES: 2.3 Shields - Ho-hum. Two heroes get together, beat the snot out of a misunderstood deity, SB learns how to draw pretty damn fast, and whines about Tana. There, I've just saved you $1.95 ($2.75 CDN). Only three more months until Kesel and Grummett return... GN: 2.2 Shields - Characterization was non-existent in this chapter compared to GL 94. Pele is just another in the series of stock Hawaiian villains we've seen enough of in this title. Jeanty just doesn't have a handle on this title artwise. A real drop from Part 1. JO: 3.7 Shields - Another nice team up well-written and well drawn. The writers did some things with both "Pele" and Silver Sword that could make for great stories in the future. ST: 2.8 Shields - Sigh. Several months of build-up lead to nothing more than another dime-store villain pretending to be a Hawaiian god. Nice to see Silver Sword redeem himself though; he is one of the best and most interesting of the regulars. This story is continued from _Green Lantern_ #94 (reviewed elsewhere in this issue of the Kryptonian Cybernet). If _Green Lantern_ is not a title that you normally pick up, I suggest you make an exception in this case. While that issue is not quite essential to the plot, you will be missing some solid storytelling and good characterization if you skip it. After being thrown into an active volcano as a sacrifice to the returned Hawaiian goddess Pele, Superboy and Green Lantern manage to save themselves by using a bit of solid teamwork. Meanwhile, Silver Sword and Pele have gone to Hilo to find worshippers. When Superboy and Green Lantern show up to stop them, Pele nearly destroys the city, showing Silver Sword that she is a fake. He turns on her, and manages to distract her long enough for Superboy to step in and take her down. She jumps into the lava instead of letting herself be taken into custody. The end? Yet another book in the continuing upward trend this title has taken over the last few months. Now that the creative team on this book has settled in, I hope we can come to expect this quality of work in the future. If you dropped this book while it was having its problems you might want to give it another try. In my opinion, Ron Marz is the best writer of young heroes on the market today. He seems to have a feel for most of the emotions and problems that they would face, and tries hard to portray them in a way that makes them a bit more real. Since he is the regular writer on both titles (_Superboy_ and _Green Lantern_) it made it possible for him to write a completely seamless story that ran between both books. As fans, we seldom get this quality of story in a cross-over because different writers have different styles and will often will mis-use a character. Marz didn't have this problem. My one complaint with this book was that the fight scene took up too much of the story. As the only real fight in a two issue story it wasn't bad; I just wish it had been shorter. While I enjoyed the work that Buscema was doing, the new team of Jeanty and Hazlewood is as good as any that I have seen. My only complaint is that I think that the panels could use more background and detail. Where the backgrounds are used, they make a real difference. A good example would be the title page where Superboy and Green Lantern escape from the lava in the Kilauea Caldera (a currently active volcano in Hawaii). Overall, solid storytelling and good art really made this book work. Rene Gobeyn ______________________________________________ SUPER-FAMILY TITLES (cont): -------------------------- SUPERBOY AND THE RAVERS #17 Jan 1998 $1.95 US/$2.75 CAN "No Weddings and a Funeral" Writers: Steve Mattsson and Karl Kesel Penciller: Josh Hood Inker: Dan Davis Computer Colorist: Stu Chaifetz Letterer: Kevin Cunningham Assistant Editor: Maureen McTigue Editor: Mike McAvennie Cover: Paul Pelletier and Dan Davis RATINGS Average: 2.0/5.0 Shields JSy: 2.0 Shields DJ: 2.6 Shields - They are definitely hurrying this story up! It's too bad, as it had a lot of potential at the beginning. Not a bad story, but not of the quality we saw earlier. DWd: 1.0 Shields - Please please please! roll on 19 so we can see how this abysmal storyline/comic will wrap up! ST: 2.5 Shields (Art: 1.0, Story: 3.1) - Except for the two-page throwaway with Aura, this was actually a pretty decent story. The Qwardians were well-portrayed (loved the scientist!) and everyone stayed in character. If only Josh Hood's art wasn't so... so... bad! Instead of the standard synopsis/commentary breakdown, let's go at this from a point by point approach. Follow with me, if you will, and let's see what works and what doesn't work in this month's installment of SUPERBOY AND THE RAVERS... First, Kindred Grim has captured Kindred Sol on Qward. Not only does he plan to use her as bait for his brother, Kindred Marx, but he also begins to leech her powers -- and plans a similar fate for Marx. The Qwardians revel in his evil, for he will give them supreme reign over the universe... Having been a Green Lantern fan for some time, I've long enjoyed seeing the Qwardians involved in DCU stories. Their anti-nature is a fun concept to play with -- just think about it: the primary enemy of the state is a size-changer who wants to be a good guy! I wish that Mattsson and Kesel had more time to explain the powers of the Kindred, because it seems to be growing. Of course, Grim will be quite displeased to find that Marx no longer has his powers, and I can almost guarantee that Marx's Mother Box will play a role in the resolution of this tale. Why would Grim want to merge the matter and anti-matter universes, and then turn over control to the Qwardians? Methinks there's more here than meets the eye. Superboy reveals to Marx that he's seen Sol, and Marx goes a bit ballistic, demanding Superboy reveal her location. Problem 1: I absolutely *hate* it when current pop slang makes its way into a comic book -- it kind of ruins any chance the comic might have of being timeless. So I really don't care for the Kid commenting that Sol is "da bomb in purple leotards." Problem 2: Marx does not lose control. For 16 issues, Kesel and Mattsson have made a point of showing how Marx doesn't let his emotions overpower him, yet here he turns into a snarling monster, baring his fangs. (Maybe it's the art, but I doubt it.) DC whines to her Granny Iris about not knowing what Hero's relationship is with Leander, but Granny tells her to stand by her friends -- and that her actions will decide who lives or dies. DC's reaction to Hero and Leander is reasonable, especially given her age, though Kesel and Mattsson should have told us this last issue when she left the Rave because of her discomfort. More on this shortly... Hero and Half-Life can't find Kaliber, and then realize he probably went back to Qward to die a warrior's death. Superboy and Marx pop in, but Marx doesn't want to take time to go to Qward. However, Rex then shows up, and Marx determines that Sol is on Qward. More on the Kindred powers again. Marx is relying on Mother Box to teleport him, and to tell him what to do next, but he can somehow tell by just touching Rex that Sol is on Qward. Mother Box should have been the one to reveal this. Oh, and just to start the art bashing, Rex looks more like a cat than a dog in this scene. On Qward, Kaliber has consulted the Science Lord about his blindness, but nothing can be done. When the Qwardian cops burst in and kill the Science Lord, Kaliber decides that it's a good day to die. Marx and the Ravers arrive on Qward just as Kal increases his size to that of a building. Marx and Rex go in search of Sol, while SB, Half-Life, and Hero remain to join the fray. Interesting scene here, and one that exhibits (again) how different Qward is. The Science Lord can see "the birth of the universe and the face of God" in Kaliber's eyes, and decides they must be studied. Just before he is killed, he decides to harvest Kaliber's eyes *before* sending young Kal to his death. (Kind of interesting that the only Qwardian who "worships" Superman is nicknamed Kal.) Aura's two pages are next. Lindsay/Aura discovers that her father killed her mother because she was "a filthy genetic freak! A metahuman that didn't deserve to live!" Aura warms up her powers for the verdict... Puh-lease. Exchange the word metahuman for mutant, and this exact scene has happened a hundred times in the X-books. I hope that Mattsson and Kesel went this direction only because the title was cut short. I'd hate to believe that this was their original plan... Back on Qward, everyone's fighting. Hero gets nailed while trying to use the H-Dial, and Sparx suddenly swoops in to rescue him. (The Qwardians don't take "the Qwa-Angel's appearance" as a good sign.) Having saved the life of her friend, Sparx is about to leave when Hero points out that Granny Iris might not have meant him. *BIG* Problem: Marx didn't blip the entire Rave to Qward. He just used Mother Box to transport himself, Rex, and the three guys. Sparx's hand-stamp should only be able to transport her between Earth and the Rave, so how did she end up on Qward? Either Mattsson and Kesel forgot the rules, or Hood drew the transport scene wrong. Sparx explains to Hero that she didn't really believe him about being gay until she saw him with Leander. If you'll recall, I asked for help understanding why seeing the two guys arm-wrestling would make Sparx get uncomfortable and bolt. Our reviews editor extraordinaire, Shane Travis, suggested that Leander might be a possible love interest for Hero. Whether it's true or not, I think I can understand how Sparx could come to that conclusion. However, Kesel and Mattsson should have explained her uneasiness last issue -- I never would have guessed this on my own, simply because I don't perceive arm-wrestling as a tip-off that two guys are forming a relationship. Again, had the title not been canceled prematurely, perhaps the writers would have been able to better illustrate this progression over several issues. Marx and Rex find Sol, but it's not really her -- it's a trap, and Marx is surrounded by the Red Shift. Meanwhile, when Sparx starts attacking the Qwardians, they decide they'd rather not fight a Qwa-Angel, and so they begin a retreat. Half-Life has damaged one of the attacking vessels, however, and it crashes into the building on which he was standing, resulting in a massive explosion... Nice use of Sparx's appearance to scare off the Qwardians. Someone ought to take this to the JLA so they'll know what to do next time the Qwardians invade.... Sure, Half-Life appears to have just been blown up. But what could you really do to a guy who's already dead? So maybe he'll just be all green stuff by now. Of course, given how often people survive these kinds of things in comics, it might be refreshing to have him actually pass on. There were more good things happening in this issue than in the last, but there were still a lot of problems. As mentioned above, many of them can probably be attributed to the early demise of the book, but some of them just seemed downright careless. The art is just as bad as ever. Maybe not Bernado-bad, but certainly not easy to look at. It's another classic case of distracting art. I mean, if you can't even make a dog look like a dog... To end on a positive note, though, Stu Chaifetz' colors continue to impress me. In fact, I'd go so far as to say this was the best colored book from the Superman group this month. All in all, a better issue than last month, but still a few problems to work out. Jeff Sykes =================================================== SUPERGIRL #17 Jan 1998 $1.95 US/$2.75 CAN "Teetering on Oblivion" Writer: Peter David Pencils: Leonard Kirk Inks: Cam Smith Letters: Pat Prentice Colors: Gene D'Angelo Seps: Digital Chameleon Assists: Maureen McTigue Brakes for Big Guys With Fins on Their Heads: Mike McAvennie Cover: Gary Frank, Cam Smith, and Patrick Martin RATINGS Average: 3.4/5.0 Shields TD: 3.8 Shields DWd: 3.0 Shields - Hmmmm... burning wing thingies... how's she going to hide these when she's Linda? Not a bad issue though. ES: 3.5 Shields - This reminds one of the awesome Despero stint in the previous incarnation of the Justice League; thank goodness L-Ron isn't wacky, I feel that David is pacing this book much better than in _Aquaman_, because I actually care about all the plot threads here. Leonard Kirk is doing a fine job as penciller. GN: 3.3 Shields - The return of Despero as a villain is a welcome (permanent?) sight. The scenes with both sets of parents sets this issue apart. David is realistically dealing with how the Danverses would react to their daughter's transformation, as well as Linda's own conflict. Can't wait to see what's up with the wings. JSy: 4.0 Shields - On the whole, this issue was nothing particularly special, but there were too many interesting moments *not* to like it. So is anyone else wondering where Mr. David's going with this angel motif, and how Wally ("Hi. I'm God") plays into it all? LF: 3.0 Shields - Peter David's offbeat writing style continues to mesh nicely with Kirk's portrayal of Supergirl, but I find that this book seemed to drag on, overall. Subplots take too many issues to resolve themselves and I find myself becoming uninterested. VV: 3.0 Shields - Not quite as good as some of the previous issues. What do do you say to someone who introduces themselves with, "Hi, I'm God."? I don't know why Peter David keeps on raiding the Justice League's rogues gallery, but it's doing okay by him. This issue begins with Sylvia, drunk and depressed, heading home from the local bar. She's listening to Buddy Holly on the radio when she runs into Despero, the psychotic galactic dictator whose body was taken over by L-Ron during the Keith Giffen-era JLA. Despero literally tosses the car aside.... Except that, when Fred Danvers discovers the wreck, it's Despero that helps get her out of the car. It seems that the alien is suffering from a severe disassociative multiple personality disorder. He is struggling to keep his destructive side submerged--only he keeps losing. While this is going on, Linda seems to be shuttling back and forth between hospital rooms, visiting first Dick's mother (injured in the Extremist free-for-all), and then Sylvia. She has a tense confrontation with Fred that is thankfully broken up by Despero's appearance and the shocking development of some new...manifestations of her powers. Meanwhile, the Kents drop by, presumably to talk to the Danverses, we learn a bit more about the creepy little kid who thinks he's God, and Andy seems to be coming closer to making a pass at Linda. (Does anybody *not* see this coming? Does anybody care about what is sure to be described as Andy's *shocking* secret?) The idea of tossing the Maid of Might together with a character like Despero --someone else who is afflicted with two personas--is inspired, and it makes for some of David's best, most subtle writing in a long, long while. David has the personalities of both L-Ron and Despero down cold, and exploits their disparateness for great effect. Contrasting it with Linda's predicament, where her parents are unable to deal with the fact that their daughter is not their daughter--but somehow better--works pretty damn well. David also deserves kudos for his characterization of the Kents as people with life and spirit (not to mention a sense of humor), and for handling the confrontation between Linda and Fred so well. David knows that Fred's signals are seriously crossed; when he moans about wanting things back the way they used to be, Linda points out that the way it used to be was terrible. I only wish David had allowed the scene to play out naturally, rather than giving it a standard "Ooops, trouble, gotta go" ending. Less successful was the scene with Malverne, his mom and Luthor's former wife, Elizabeth Perske--I kept wondering why Linda had to be there, as it really did nothing to move things forward. As for the art, Kirk is firmly back on track, with a compositional sense that crackles with energy. Hell, the first three pages are an excellent example of storytelling and mood. Pretty much whenever Despero is on stage, Kirk knows what he's doing (my fave is the wordless scene on page 7, proving that even asleep Despero is a formidable foe), making it obvious through facial expressions which personality is in charge. There is so much character stuff in this issue, that it just allows the man to shine all the more. Cam Smith's inks are beginning to mesh well with Kirk, enhancing his power without overpowering them. I loved this issue--so much so that I didn't even mind the reference to 'Comet' on page 8. The only thing that prevented it from getting a score in the 4's is the lame Andy Jones subplot and the even lamer reintroduction of Elizabeth. Other than that, this is top flight, and hopefully the start of a good strong run of stories. Thomas Deja ______________________________________________ OTHER SUPERMAN TITLES: --------------------- JLA #14 Jan 1998 $1.95 US/$2.75 CAN "Twilight of the Gods" Writer: Grant Morrison Penciller: Howard Porter Inker: John Dell Letterer: Ken Lopez Colorist: Pat Garrahy Assistant Ed.: L.A. Williams Associate Ed.: Peter Tomasi Editor: Dan Raspler Cover: Howard Porter and John Dell RATINGS Average: 3.7/5.0 Shields AW: 3.7 Shields DWd: 4.0 Shields - I'm really enjoying the JLA and what is happening, but Porter tries to jam too much into panels resulting in a very cramped and seemingly hurried issue. Still, Grant is a legend! ES: 4.5 Shields - Once again, the JLA doesn't disappoint!! This storyline takes you right back to the classic confrontations the Justice League had 20 years ago, and makes it an epic not to be missed. Alternate timelines with bite never do me wrong! JSy: 3.4 Shields - *Strong* characterizations of the desperate Leaguers, but Darkseid just felt wrong. He'd *know* if something had happened to Desaad, and I doubt he could have his brain fried so easily. LF: 4.2 Shields - Strong art and Morrison's bang-on portrayals make this issue a must-have, but like others in the series, it seems a tad rushed. Hopefully when "Rock of Ages" is over, readers will be able to just watch everyone interact with each other for a bit. MS: 3.0 Shields - Yeah, it was a swell story. Only one page of Superman, but still... TD: 3.2 Shields - Eh... it just seemed to be treading water before the big blow-out next month. In the penultimate chapter of the "Rock of Ages" saga, Morrison mines an old science fiction tradition, the "future that could be if we don't go back and change the past." It's a well-proven formula that lets writers do just about anything they want and imagine any scenario. The problem is that Morrison, Porter and Dell did it so well last issue that there's little else to do except kill off the future versions of our heroes and send the 1997-era heroes back home. It's not that they don't do it well, it's just that the most interesting visions of this future were presented last month. With all the rest of the story crammed in the previous four issues, I can't help questioning if this was really the place to pause for a full-length story. As we left the JLAers--Aquaman, Green Lantern, and the Flash--last issue, they were still stuck fifteen years in the future, on an Earth where the destruction of the Philosopher's Stone by Lex Luthor in 1997 has somehow cleared the way for Darkseid to take over the Earth. Future Batman had defeated Desaad, and devised a plan to confront Darkseid while at the same time using Metron's Moebius chair to send the JLAers back to 1997. Phase 1 of the plan is carried out by Azteka and Argent, who attack Darkseid's Anti-Life, "zombie" factory on the Moon. Porter and Dell present their most powerful vision as they portray the victims of Anti-life equations emerging from the factory, minds wiped clean, with hand-shaped masks covering their eyes and mouths. Azteka and Argent must dash across an open courtyard, but Argent is felled by Swarmtrooper firepower. Phase 2 of the plan has Amazo, Green Arrow and the Atom carrying out a diversionary attack over Metropolis. The Atom and Green Arrow dodge the volley of weapon blasts, but "mind-eating codes" scramble Amazo's circuitry. In Phase 3, Aquaman, Batman, Wonder Woman, Flash and Green Lantern launch a frontal attack on Darkseid, arriving via Boom Tube. While Wonder Woman holds off Darkseid, Batman tricks Metron into becoming human and uses a powerful hypnotic agent to force him to send the JLAers back in time. WW dies taking out the Grandmother Box (Granny Goodness merged with Mother Box), and Batman faces down Darkseid. In a fine exchange of dialogue, Darkseid asks, "Do I know you?" Batman answers, "We've shared a few laughs. Everything you know. Everything you own: I'm taking it all." Azteka then releases the power of her "fourth dimensional battery" and blows up the moonbase (and herself), freeing the zombies from Darkseid's control. Darkseid thoughtfully dispatches Batman. ("How small you are, yet...you have hurt me. I respect that.") All these delays allow Connor Hawke and Ray Palmer to arrive on the scene. Using his brain for the first time since Zero Hour, The Atom realizes that Darkseid's forcefield is transparent, and therefore must allow light to pass through. Shrinking down to quantum size, and propelled by one of GA's arrows, he bypasses the field and enters Darkseid's brain through his eye where he performs a lobotomy on the dark god, dying in the process. Now the only survivors are Green Arrow, Orion of the New Gods, and the Black Racer--the New God embodiment of death, who has been observing the entire struggle. The Black Racer watches as Orion employs a Genesis Box to help him destroy the entire universe, intending that it will then be re-created without the taint of Darkseid. I liked the addition of the Black Racer--Morrison makes the struggle more than just a killfest by having each of the heroes, as they realize their deaths are imminent, acknowledge the Racer in their own way. Since Darkseid only conquered New Genesis and Earth, though, wasn't wiping out the whole universe just a little extreme? Suddenly we're back to the present and--hey! The fight's over and the Injustice Gang lost! What happened? The last thing we see is Superman holding the Philosopher stone, Luthor trying to manipulate it, and Superman destroying it. Shhhzzaak! Uh-oh. So why did Morrison stop to tell a two-issue tale of the future and still fail to spell out how Darkseid and the Philosopher's Stone are connected? And what about Wonderworld? Are we going to see how the struggle against the Injustice Gang proceeded before that last scene? Next issue is going to be double-size--will that be enough space to tie up all the loose ends? And will I be able to do more than just drop Superman's name at the end of the review to justify its existence in the Kryptonian Cybernet? Tune in next month when we answer the musical question, "after you destroy the universe, whaddaya do for an encore?" Anatole Wilson ______________________________________________ OTHER SUPERMAN TITLES (cont): ---------------------------- SUPERMAN ADVENTURES #15 Jan 1998 $1.95 US/$2.75 CAN "Maximum Effort" Writer: Mark Evanier Penciller: Rick Burchett Inker: Terry Austin Colorist: Rick Taylor Letterer: Lois Buhalis Assistant: Maureen McTigue Editor: Mike McAvennie Cover: Rick Burchett, Terry Austin, and Marie Severin RATINGS Average: 3.0/5.0 Shields CoS: 3.5 Shields ES: 3.0 Shields - I don't know how many more 'kooky' issues I can take from this book. Considering some of the awesome storytelling Scott McLeod did before, this book is starting to want for more. Why does it have to be treated like a kiddie book all of a sudden? GN: 2.7 Shields - Another lighthearted romp in the S:TAS universe, this time focusing on Bibbo. Though showing the story from a supporting character's perspective often reveals much about Superman (as shown in the regular titles), given that this is a largely unexplored Superman, hopefully stories won't fall into the trap of not using Superman as a regular focus. JSy: 3.0 Shields - The "Do Superman's powers make him less of a hero?" question is interesting, and how can you not enjoy a Bibbo story? Luthor, however, would never be as obvious and uncareful as he is in this story. ST: 2.9 Shields - Some nice bits and visual gags but overall it didn't gel. This Bibbo is too much of a buffoon and braggart compared to his comic-book counterpart, but at least they both share a heart of gold. The insurance scam is not a scheme worthy of Luthor, though, and he was far too careless in executing it. Capsule Review - A look at the Animated Universe's version of Bibbo and how he and his Fav'rit superhero, Superman, teamed up and fought one of Luthor's schemes. An entertaining, if lightweight, issue that would have worked well as either a comic or a TV episode. One of the things I like about _Superman Adventures_ is that we get nothing but straight-ahead story. It wasn't until this issue that I realized how much baggage the character of Bibbo has attached to him in the regular Superman line. There, he's a ex-prizefighting bar-owner who is friends with Jimmy Olson, and has a back-story involving a lottery windfall, the Death of Superman story, and so much more. Here, he's just a regular guy who wants to live up to Superman's ideals, but doesn't seem to have either the skills or the abilities. The story starts with Bibbo telling his friends at the local bar how he and Superman foiled a bank robbery. Together they beat up the bad guys and Bibbo is able to say that he's not only Superman's pal, but an equal partner. Unfortunately for Bibbo, another bar patron was there and tells everyone that Bibbo was more of a blunderer who got in Superman's way. All Bibbo really did was knock the mask off one of the thieves, revealing his scarred face. As the laughter of the crowd drives Bibbo away, Clark Kent is looking into the strange bank robbery. Despite having high tech weapons and a viable plan, the crooks didn't take anything. They accidentally destroyed twenty million dollars in negotiable securities owned by Lex Luthor, which were heavily insured. Luthor, as we see, looks fairly pleased at their destruction, and figures that if it works once, it will work again. As Clark Kent tracks down information on Luthor's shady insurance dealings, Bibbo encounters the man with the scar and decides to follow him. Once at their hideout -- a farmhouse outside the city -- the crooks take off in a tank back toward Metropolis. Bibbo grabs the tank and rides with them to the Luthor Metropolitan museum, where the armored crooks start destroying everything in sight. Bibbo tries to help by grabbing a bomb they've placed, but by doing so triggers an instant detonator. Looks like a job for Superman; he grabs the bomb and flies it out of the museum, saving everyone inside, but the explosion knocks him silly and allows the crooks to get away. Bibbo walks away, dejected that he's screwed up again. Upon investigation, firemen reveal that the paintings aren't damaged, but it looks as if they had been disintegrated with no trace remaining. After hearing the words of a Salvation Army volunteer ("You do what you can in this world."), Bibbo seeks out Clark Kent and reveals the location of the crooks' hideout. Despite warnings from Clark to stay away, Bibbo bikes out there to try and stop them, but is nearly run over by the crooks as they make another run. Someone recognizes Bibbo, and they decide that he shouldn't be around to mess up their plans anymore. As they fire, one of the crooks jumps in the way of the bullets, revealing himself to be Superman, who makes short work of the armored thugs, even allowing Bibbo to take out the leader. As Luthor prepares another insurance scam, Superman knocks on his window, holding up one of the thugs to let Luthor know that it is all over. Bibbo tells his new story at the bar, and the same people begin to ridicule him and his fantasies. As Bibbo leaves, however, Superman flies by. He waves at Bibbo and calls out, "Thanks for all your help. Hope we can work together again sometime." Bibbo departs to slack-jawed gaping by the patrons. I had forgotten until this story that when Bibbo showed up in the continuity Superman books he was a light supporting character, who bore no slight resemblance to Popeye. In this issue, he's a squinty eyed sailor who is comic relief with a twist. The story starts strong, and while Luthor's scheme in interesting, it's almost all Bibbo. The character goes through an arc (from laughing stock to hero), and we see Superman through his eyes. Like a lot of _Superman Adventures_ stories, most of the best parts are throw-aways: Clark Kent having trouble opening a jar, his investigation being a long one with a lot of paperwork, and Luthor's calm greed in working his plan. Burchett and Austin are truly a great team on this book, and no one else who has worked on it has been able to deliver the light, throw away jokes and subtle characterization they work into each story. Evanier also does a nice job. The story, while not inspired, was well-done and solid entertainment. Now, if they could make Bibbo this interesting in the other Superman titles.... Cory Strode ______________________________________________ SPECIALS AND GUEST APPEARANCES: ------------------------------ SUPERMAN: SECRET FILES AND ORIGINS #1 Jan 1998 $4.95 US/$6.95 CAN "Secret Origin: Who...is Superman?" Writer & layouts: Dan Jurgens Finishes: Jerry Ordway Colors: Jason Wright Letters: Albert DeGuzman Separator: Digital Chameleon "Guided Tour: Superman's Fortress" Writer: Dan Jurgens Penciller: Todd Nauck Inker: Jose Marzan Jr. "Lost Pages: Who watched Metropolis during Superman's Honeymoon?" Writer: Karl Kesel Pencils: Ron Frenz Inks: Brett Breeding Letters: Albert DeGuzman Cover: Tom Grummett, Dennis Rodier, and Patrick Martin RATINGS Average: 3.7/5.0 Shields RG: (No Rating Submitted) DJ: 3.6 Shields - Where was the Alpha Centurion in the Honeymoon pages? EJ: 4.5 Shields - I could not put this one down! The story with the "college friend" was a fresh twist on an oft-told tale. I loved how the news- paper articles foreshadowed what may be coming in Superman's life. ES: 3.0 Shields - Thanks for the spoilers, guys! Grrrrrrrrrrrrr..........!!! GN: 4.2 Shields - Jurgens and Ordway deliver the best Superman story of the month, exploring in print the oft-debated differences between Superman and Batman, with good insights into both. JSy: 4.3 Shields - Excellent origin story from Jurgens, and Jurgens/Ordway make just about the best art team in comics today. Wish they'd work together more often. *Man* did this book spill a bit too much about the next couple of months, though. LF: 3.0 Shields - I felt that I was once again being hit on the head about the origins of Superman. Adding Batman was a nice touch but Clark's origin has been done so many times that it has lost all appeal to me. MS: 2.5 Shields - Everything I already knew about Superman! Great origin story by Jurgens, followed by weak, yet informative backups. Recommended for newer fans who don't want to buy all the back issues. TD: 2.5 Shields - A very, *very* mixed bag. Jurgens' origin re-cap is miles better than Stern's in S:MOT a while back (is this guy on a roll or what?), but the rest of it was filler. I really didn't care for being told, in great detail, the plot for the next story arc. Superman is busy fighting tornadoes in the Midwest, while a mysterious stranger looks into Clark Kent's past. The mystery seems to resolve itself as Gordon Selkirk, Clark's college roommate shows up at the Kent farm unexpectedly. But why is he putting together the real story of Superman's origin anyway? The answer, while not unexpected from the clues dropped during the story, reveal some interesting relationships between a couple of the DCU favorite heroes. As retellings of the Superman origin story goes, this one doesn't reveal any surprises, but the details of the story are brought out in a different and very interesting fashion. The art in the story is just short of fantastic, and the coloring of the Superman figure hints strongly of the Red/Blue stories to come. This one was worth the price of the book by itself. From here the features and shorts were just gravy. Like all the other `Secret File and Origin' books that DC is producing now, one of the features included single page introductions of all the major characters in the Superman titles, and some of the minor ones. Each character chosen had a short text profile, and a nearly full page pin-up. Other features of the book, included a short reprint of some "Daily Planet" stories outlining some of the most recent events in Metropolis, and a short out-take from the "Daily Whisper" (a Metropolis scandal sheet that often plays a minor role in the Superman stories). Each of these features go a long way towards bringing a new reader up to speed on what is going on in the `Super' titles. Other interesting items in the book included a tour of the Fortress of Solitude, and some story pages of what went on in Metropolis during the honeymoon. The Loophole scene with Wonder Woman was a lot of fun. While not on a must-read list, the book is highly recommended for new readers and those who like a look `behind the scenes' into the heroes lives. I thought it was well worth the price. Rene Gobeyn =================================================== GREEN LANTERN #94 Jan 1998 $1.95 US/$2.75 CAN "Idol Worship; Part 1" Writer: Ron Marz Pencils: Paul Pelletier Inks: Terry Austin Colors: Jason Wright Letters: Chris Eliopoulos Associate: Dana Kurtin Editor: Kevin Dooley Cover: Tom Grummett, Terry Austin, and Schwager RATINGS Average: 3.0/5.0 Shields RG: (No Rating Submitted) EJ: 2.8 Shields - I like the new GL. I really like this new lady he's having to deal with. That has possibilities.... I loved the part when he started to write his real name as an autograph! And Superboy showed respect for his feelings. Maybe the Kid is growing up? ES: 2.5 Shields - Talk about a forced crossover. As a consistent GL reader, I'd advise you not to rate this one as par for the course, but see it as Ron Marz stretching an average story over two issues and killing two birds with one stone. GN: 3.0 Shields - It's nice to see Superboy shown as growing (at least emotionally); that's really been lacking in his own book as of late. GL relates well to The Kid, perhaps because both heroes are trying to grow into others' shoes. I hope the art lesson isn't just dropped. JSy: 3.2 Shields - Reasonably well-told, and nice artwork from Pelletier and Austin. Funny that Superboy has a recurring villain in the Menehune, though they've never appeared in the Kid's own book... ST: 3.7 Shields - Good by-play between the two, and excellent insights into Superboy's mental state, both currently and in general. Extra points for the return of the Menehune, who could become very interesting (and very unique) supporting characters for SB. TD: 3.0 Shields - Some nice interplay between GL and Superboy, but this read like an issue of DC COMICS PRESENTS. While visiting Hawaii to gather material for an art assignment, Kyle Rayner (Green Lantern) gets entangled with some of the local troubles. First he teams up with Superboy to tangle with Kekona (a member of a mythological race known as the Menehune, introduced in _Adventures of Superman_ #541). After they defeat Kekona they are captured (too easily!) by Silver Sword and Pele, the Hawaiian volcano goddess. They are both sacrificed to an active volcano. The story is continued in _Superboy_ #47. There should be more team-ups like this one. No long, boring fight scenes between the two heroes before they team up. Instead, Superboy simply steps in and works to help Green Lantern defeat a rather minor foe. Afterwards, Green Lantern almost plays big brother to Superboy, talking about his latest troubles and trying to teach him a little self control. If you're a regular reader of the Green Lantern title, you know how strange a situation this is. Both Kyle and Superboy stay completely in character, and the story works to show both of them at their best. Of course it helps that Marz is the regular writer of both books. I just hope that this is the start of some well-done crossovers between the two characters. Both of them could use a good friend, and their styles complement each other. The art in the book is nicely done-- very clean and with plenty of detail in the backgrounds and establishing shots to keep things in perspective. It's an unusual situation for Kyle to find himself in. When on his own, Kyle seems to have a inferiority complex around other heroes. This is more apparent in his JLA appearances. It's a bit unusual for him to be cast in the 'close friend' role. While he seems to be becoming friendly with Wally West (Flash) and Connor Hawke (Green Arrow), he doesn't seem to have many friends that he can relax with. The dichotomy of the two different approaches to the heroic lifestyle is dramatic. This is shown in the autographing scene where Kyle almost uses his real name instead of Green Lantern. Kyle is very uncomfortable dealing with the spotlight, while Superboy basks in it. Superboy has no secret identity; he came into being with the role, and really doesn't know any other way of life. Kyle on the other hand had a 'civilian' life before he became a hero. In some ways, his mundane life, and the complications with his career as a hero make Kyle lot more interesting. For example, the by-play between Kyle and his new agent, (the innuendo and double entendres are well done) show just the beginning of a new professional challenge for Kyle in the coming months. Overall, a good book and one I recommend highly. If you aren't a regular reader of the book, this might be a good time to start. Rene Gobeyn ______________________________________________ MANUSCRIPTS OF STEEL ------------------------------ Reviews of After-Byrne Superman Special Stories by Denes House (househld@borg.com) ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- ACTION COMICS ANNUAL #3 "Executive Action" an Armageddon 2001 Annual Written by Roger Stern Pencils by Tom Grummett Inks by Denis Rodier, Doug Hazlewood, Carlos Garzon, & Brad Vancata Colored by Whitmore & Hollingsworth Cover by Dave Gibbons 1991 Squarebound Format, $2.00 US/$2.50 CAN Rating: 4.0/5.0 Shields ---------------------------------------------------------- "Lord Acton once wrote, 'Power tends to corrupt and absolute power corrupts absolutely,'" quotes a character in ACTION COMICS ANNUAL #3. What would happen if Superman, a person with nigh-absolute physical power, acquires tremendous political and social power as well? That's the question explored by Roger Stern and Tom Grummett in this engaging Annual, a strong part of DC Comics' 1991 Annuals cross-over, Armageddon 2001. The story opens with Superman slugging it out with troops of parademons from Apokolips, and with Kalibak, the son of Darkseid. During the fight, Superman pulls his punches a bit, even though he knows who Kalibak is. Superman vows not to underestimate Kalibak's threat again. A boom tube provides escape for the parademons and Kalibak, and a late-arriving Metron reveals that he drew Superman there subconsciously by planting thoughts in his head. Superman hates being manipulated... Enter Waverider -- a being of pure energy who rides the streams of time to prevent a fascistic super-powered dictator, Monarch, from coming to be. Waverider is from Monarch's future, and knows that Monarch was once one of Earth's greatest heroes. The story of Armageddon 2001 shows Waverider merging with the lives of the DC Universe's heroes, to see if they turn out to be Monarch. Waverider had already merged once with Superman's timeline (In SUPERMAN ANNUAL #3 -- See last month's Kryptonian Cybernet for my already-classic review of that book) and discovered tragedy -- Superman becoming a Tyrant of Steel who ends up being killed by the Batman. But in BATMAN ANNUAL #15, Waverider experienced none of that future. In ACTION ANNUAL #3, Waverider decides to examine Superman once more. Merging with a happy Clark Kent, Waverider experiences Clark's love for Lois Lane, his fiancee. Returning from a lovely night on the town, Clark receives an answering machine message from Ma Kent -- his Pa has had a heart attack. Pa dies, leaving Clark, Ma and Lois in grief. We see Lois and Clark's wedding -- different from the one portrayed in SUPERMAN ANNUAL #3, most notably in the absence of Pa. Meanwhile, Bruno Mannheim's Intergang scheme to blackmail Metropolis with a nuclear device is foiled by Superman. In SUPERMAN ANNUAL #3, this nuclear device detonated, killing Lois and everyone in Metropolis. That was the event that triggered Superman's change into a tyrant. But Superman somehow unconsciously "remembered" that future, and worked double-hard to prevent it. As Waverider comments, "Clearly this will be a VERY DIFFERENT future!" The differences get interesting as Clark's old Smallville pal, Senator Pete Ross, decides to run for President. He asks Clark to run his campaign. Things look good until a man steps out of a crowd at one of Ross' speeches and fires an automatic weapon at the candidate! Clark dashes in, too late to stop the first bullets from striking Pete, but the final few shred away his suit, revealing his Superman garb underneath. Ross is seriously wounded, and Clark's greatest secret is revealed. In the hospital, a stunned Ross asks Clark to pick up where he had left off -- to step in and run for President in Pete's place. After careful consideration, Superman agrees. Legal challenges and political nuances aside, Superman's candidacy sweeps the elections, and the Last Kryptonian becomes President of the United States! Dealing with Lex Luthor, Jr., the national debt, terrorism, the environment, natural resources, and disarmament, Superman becomes a world leader on an unprecedented scale. It is only when he calls together the world's super-heroes to help with disarmament inspection and verification that a serious challenger steps forward -- Guy Gardner, Green Lantern of Earth. Angered at Superman's disarmament plan, Gardner attacks the President, who through sheer force of will captures Gardner's power ring. Thus armed with the most powerful weapon in the universe, possessing remarkable physical strength, and tremendous political power, would Superman go over the edge to impose his will on the world? Roger Stern weaves a gripping story in the finest tradition of "What if..." tales. Handling many of the problems inherent to the story well, he creates a great deal of suspense, and manages to hook the reader. This is no mean feat, considering the inherent difficulties of stories like this. Since there were a bunch of Annuals still to go that summer, the reader knew from the start that Superman would not turn out to be Monarch. Since major changes in the lives of supporting characters would happen in the regular books, the reader knew from the start that Pa's death and other events in the story would not be left to stand. Still, Roger Stern pulls it all together with style and class, weaving an excellent story around a compelling premise. Tom Grummett, judging from Kryptonian Cybernet reader response, is one of the fan-favorite Superman artists, and it is not hard to see why. His rounded, massive style is very pleasing to the eye, though lacking in formal technical merits. Simply put, his artwork is pleasant, but not strictly GOOD art. His knowledge of anatomy is minimal, his facial expressions and use of shadows clumsy. What he has in spades though, is design sense. The man can design shots and pages like nobody's business. He tells a story well. Some of my favorite shots are times when Waverider, living Superman's future through him, duplicates the actions of the Man of Steel off-panel. The newspaper front page revealing Superman's secret is powerful, as well. The multitude of inkers working over him in this book don't hinder it as much as was the case in SUPERMAN ANNUAL #3, and the coloring is first-rate. A fine Dave Gibbons cover completes a solid artistic package. Capsule review: A great story, with a fantastic premise and solid execution. Artistically good, with Grummett's keen sense of design overcoming his lack of technical knowledge. A solid entry in a generally good series of Annuals. Story: Who hasn't wondered what it would be like to have Superman for President of the U.S.? Stern does it well. 4.5 Shields out of 5. Art: Fan-favorite Grummett does not disappoint. 3.5 Shields out of 5. Overall: 4.0 Shields out of 5. Next Month: I actually liked the S:TAS episode "Warrior Queen." Well, what if Maxima got her man? ______________________________________________ THE PHANTOM ZONE: Reviews of the pre-Crisis Man of Steel ------------------------------------------------------------------ TALES OF EARTH-ONE -------------------------------------- by Bob Hughes (rhughes3@ix.netcom.com) Together Again for the First Time, or How Clark Kent Met Lois Lane Once the powers that be at DC comics had decided that Superboy (a feature that was almost necessary due to the need to protect their trademark) would be about the adventures of Superman as a boy, time paradoxes set in. The original Superman stories had never presumed a boyhood Super role, or left room for one. Superman first appeared in _Action_ #1. No one had ever seen him before. For there to be a Superboy, the writers had to ignore established history. The earlier stories were retroactively declared inaccurate. Once that pill had been swallowed by the readership, it became harder for writers stuck for plots (and editors stuck for cover sales gimmicks) to resist going back to the same well, in some cases over and over again. If Clark was a super-hero as a boy, then when did he first meet Lois Lane? It was inevitable that such a story be written. Given the nature of comic marketing in those days, it was inevitable that it be written many, many times. Thus it was that the May 1948 issue of _Adventure Comics_ (#128) cover featured "How Clark Kent Met Lois Lane". Although the cover, featuring Superboy flying Lois high above a burning house, is by Win Mortimer, the inside art is by that bete noire of Golden Age comic fans: "Artist Unknown". "Artist Unknown" appears to have drawn all the Superboy stories from mid-1947 through mid-1949, the period during which John Sikela left to work on Funnyman with Siegel and Shuster. The fact that this artist's name has escaped us is rendered doubly annoying because he was pretty good! Working firmly in the Shuster/Sikela tradition, he still managed to produce his own exciting take on the dynamic Superboy, producing aerial shots that were breathtaking and serving up non-standard "camera" angles throughout that kept the art from becoming stale and repetitive. DC workhorse Win Mortimer helped out by inking this story, making sure that all characters stayed on model. Mortimer had just come to the US from Canada at this time and needed full-time employment to satisfy the immigration officials. Therefore he asked permission to work out of the DC offices. Soon the editors were taking advantage of his presence to draw (or redraw) the majority of the Superman and Batman covers for the next five years. consequently Mortimer pencilled very few stories at this time. His career at DC lasted for decades, however, including a stint pencilling the _Legion of Super-Heroes_, and he even pencilled some of the early John Byrne "new Superman" mini-series! It was writer Bill Finger, however, who had to come up with a way for Clark and Lois to meet while still in high school. And to figure out something for them to do! With almost the first line of text he hit upon the formula that all these stories would follow for years to come: "Young Clark has to go through a routine he will repeat as a man!" As the story opens, a letter arrives for small town boy Clark Kent from the Daily Planet in the nearby city of Metropolis. He has been chosen one of the two winners of an annual contest to honor the best high school reporters with a chance to work at the Daily Planet for a week! The other winner? Lois Lane, of course. Daily Planet editor, Mr. Morton soon introduces our two protagonists with pretty much the same results as the previous "first" meeting in _Action_ #1. "Golly ! She's so pretty!" thinks Clark. "Golly! He's so unexciting!" thinks Lois. Soon the decade-old game is afoot. Young Clark and Lois compete to see who can get a byline story into the paper, but Clark is handicapped by having to change to Superboy all the time. Lois gets the scoops, is awed by seeing Superboy in Action, and totally unimpressed with Clark. Lois, as usual, is plenty smart. She figures out who's using construction equipment to pull robberies by putting clues together in the newspaper morgue. She's also just as foolhardy, sneaking into the gang's hideout, getting caught and rescued by Superboy just before being smashed with a wrecking ball. Superboy is impressed with her courage and coolness under fire. "You've got plenty of nerve! Any other girl would have fainted!" Clark has less luck, finally having to buy Lois an ice cream sundae as payment of their wager as to who would get the better scoop! The story was successful enough that the editors followed it up with a Clark meets Perry White story in _Adventure_ 152. Then they left it alone for awhile. But in April 1955, secure in the knowledge that most of the people who had read _Adventure_ 128 were no longer reading comics, the editors came up with another "First" meeting between Clark and Lois. _Adventure_ 211 headlined "Superboy's Most Amazing Dream!" The Win Mortimer cover pretty much sums up this entire story. As Superboy sleeps at the bottom right hand corner, the rest of the cover features a dream sequence in which an adult Lois Lane and Lana Lang both confront Superman, telling him: "Greetings, Clark Kent, Lois and I both know your secret identity, Superman!" The sleeping Superboy moans, "Oh, no! When I grow up, I'm going to have Lois Lane as well as Lana Lang in my hair.!" Inside, Otto Binder, Curt Swan and Stan Kaye produce one of those stereotypical Superman stories of the Fifties. It begins with Lana Lang trying to prove that Clark is Superboy. After foiling her latest annoying scheme, he returns to Jonathan Kent's general store, where he finds his father working on his will. Shocked, Clark wonders who he will have to confide in when his parents are gone and wonders if he should finally break down and tell Lana he's Superboy. Lying on the couch, he then dozes off and dreams of being Superman. In this version, Clark gets a job at the Metropolis Museum working in the archaeology department with Lana. Then he dreams Lois Lane is a Planet reporter assigned to cover the arrival of Superman in Metropolis. Confronted with a new snoop in his life, Clark finally tells Lana his secret identity, thinking she can help him protect it from Lois. Lana is not very good at it though and Lois finds out in one day! Fortunately, Clark wakes up from his dream and resolves never to tell Lana -- or Lois either, if he ever meets her again. He states that he had once met Lois Lane before at a convention of school reporters thereby resolving the puzzle that Otto Binder had presented to the readers at the beginning of the story. How can Clark dream about someone he's never met? As the difference between these two tales shows, the Superman franchise suffered greatly in the mid-fifties. Lois, who had once been a fascinating multi-faceted character admired by Superman is now a snoop, a pest, who is constantly "in my hair". Whether this change is due to a deliberate aiming of the stories at a younger readership, or to a change in American attitudes in the decade following World War II is unclear. The result is a narrowing of story possibilities however. The art also suffers as DC apparently was working at eliminating anything representing excitement from their books ______________________________________________ SUPERMAN: THE ANIMATED SERIES --------------------------------------- Ratings Panelists: CH: Curtis Herink MS: Mike Shields NO: Neil Ottenstein DH: Denes House NB: Nathan Bredfeldt SD: Scott Devarney The first rating given after the average is that of the reviewer. Given airdates correspond to the date of first US airing as regularly scheduled on the Kids' WB. =========================================== Episode #24: "Solar Power" ----------------------------------------------- Reviewed by Denes House (househld@borg.com) September 26, 1997 Written by Robert Goodman Directed by Kazuhide Tomonaga Guest-starring Robert Hays as Edward Lytener/Luminus RATINGS: Average: 2.9/5.0 Shields DH: 2.5 Shields NB: 2.5 Shields - Though the idea with the satellites is clever, I think less of this "villain" than I do the Toyman. How did this guy get a second episode? CH: 3.6 Shields - A wonderful premise spoiled by a weak finish. (Superman's victory was essentially luck -- but still luck that he earned.) NO: 3.0 Shields This is a creative episode which suffers a lot from not knowing what it is talking about. The episode opens on a prison yard. A prisoner walks towards some guards who are awaiting the arrival of a helicopter. The prisoner activates a Kirby-esque box on his belt -- AND VANISHES! The guards scramble around looking for him, but can't find him. He steals the helicopter and flies away, making it disappear, as well. The prisoner is laser specialist Lytener, from the episode "Target." Later, it is an overcast day at the Daily Planet, where Clark Kent drops a pencil under his desk. Glancing about to make sure no one is looking he lifts up the desk with one hand and reaches under to retrieve his wayward writing instrument. In the process, he wrenches his shoulder. In pain, he realizes he is feeling quite weak... He receives a call from Lois Lane, the lone passenger aboard a sky tram bound for the prison. Rather than lying low like the police recommended, she is tracking down leads on Lytener's escape. Of course, an invisible Lytener shows up, and puts Lois in danger. But this time, his quarry is not Lois -- it's Superman, and Lois is the bait. Superman saves Lois, in the process losing the tram. He's even weaker now, and Lytener becomes visible. Now in a Kirby-influenced costume, he's called Luminus, he declares that he is testing Superman. Later, Superman glances overhead, to see the clouds part to reveal a red sky and sun! Using LexCorp satellites (Lytener used to work for Luthor) Luminus has created a force field to block all wavelengths of the sun but red. As Superman fans well know, beneath a red sun, Superman is as powerless as any human. It is a race to the finish, with a rapidly dwindling Superman facing off against a hologram-wielding Luminus. Who will win? Guess -- or watch to find out. This episode has several great scenes. My favorite is when Lois confronts Luthor by phone about whether or not he provided the satellites for Lytener used to block Superman's power. Luthor is shooting arrows in a huge room. He retorts, "Lois, would I jeopardize world markets just to settle some private vendetta with Superman?" and fires an arrow -- BULL'S EYE! Later, Lois and Jimmy go looking for a LexCorp satellite facility, and find an empty lot. Lois glances skyward and exclaims -- "LOOK! Up in the SKY!" Jimmy replies, "It's a bird." And it is. A bird sitting on an invisible building. Classic lines, infused with contextual humor. The episode builds genuine menace, with a de-powered Superman facing off against a powerful villain. Where it lacks is in some of the specifics. Holograms are cool, but they require a sophisticated projection system. Lytener's holograms of himself carry laser weapons. Superman scoffs at Lytener -- holograms can't hurt him! Lytener responds "we might be only made of light, but so are lasers..." and zaps the Man of Steel. Unfortunately, lasers require delicate and powerful focusing lenses, chambers of special gasses, and a powerful energy source to work. They are not just Light. In other words, a hologram, if one could possibly be generated in thin air, could not fire a laser beam from a holographic gun. These may seem like nit-picks, but they really stuck out to me while I was watching the episode. There are other questions, many of which plague Star Trek's holodecks as well, like if a holographic scene is at floor level, how can holographic water and sharks below your feet be possible? At least Superman finds a wall in this "holodeck" -- a concession to reality. Robert Hays' Lytener is effective, jovial but menacing, a good addition to Superman's stable of villains, if you can get past the pseudo-science of his abilities. =========================================== Episode #27: "The Prometheon" ----------------------------------------------------------- Reviewed by Curtis Herink (herink_cd@acadmn.mercer.edu) September 12, 1997 Story by Alan Burnett and Stan Berkowitz Written by Stan Berkowitz Directed by Nobuo Tomizawa Guest-starring Victor Brandt as Professor Hamilton Charles Napier as General Hardcastle Frank Welker as Creature RATINGS: Average: 3.3/5.0 Shields CH: 3.6 Shields NB: 2.3 Shields - Another "rampaging giant" episode, only without the faux emotional involvement of Monkey Fun. Good job introducing anti-Superman sentiment! NO: 3.7 Shields - Lots of action, but needed some planning on how things would work out. MS: 3.8 Shields Against a starry background, a space shuttle appears and we hear a gravely voice describing a desperate situation: An asteroid is on its way toward Earth, hours away from smashing into Metropolis. "Ten million lives will be wiped out instantly -- and they'll be the fortunate ones." Onboard the shuttle are the people assigned to stop this from happening: several enlisted men, Professor Hamilton, and General Hardcastle (whose voice we have been hearing). As the general puts it, "It's up to us to destroy it as we would any other enemy -- utterly and completely." With his troops informed of their mission, the general turns to Professor Hamilton and suggests that there was never any need to involve Superman (or, as the general refers to him, "the alien"). The professor clearly had expected Superman to join this mission, indicating that he should have been onboard the shuttle for its liftoff. The Man of Steel's absence is soon explained when a tapping outside the shuttle draws our attention to Superman floating outside in his spacesuit getup. He had been drawn away to handle an earthquake in Albania, but is now ready to deal with the oncoming asteroid. This turn of events quite pleases the professor, who then relegates the military team to standby status. Superman picks up explosives from the shuttle and distributes them to various strategic locations on the asteroid. His work takes him around to the far side of the asteroid, out of our view, where he discovers shackled there a gigantic, humanoid creature whose flesh seems as rock-like as the asteroid to which it is bound. The professor's investigations soon reveal that the creature is alive and that some kind of transmission in a binary code is emanating from within the asteroid. Hamilton wants to decipher the code and further study the creature, but Hardcastle thinks they must go ahead and demolish the asteroid, even if it means destroying the creature. To do otherwise would endanger millions of lives. Superman suggests diverting the asteroid into Earth orbit to buy time. Hamilton eagerly accepts this possibility over the general's grumbling objections. As Superman gives his all to change the asteroid's path, the creature comes into sunlight and starts to stir. That's too much for Hardcastle, who detonates the charges without even a warning to Superman. The asteroid breaks apart and a huge chunk heads straight for the shuttle, but Superman moves in and knocks the chunk away with a mighty roundhouse. In the meantime, the creature has been released and is now falling straight toward Metropolis in the clutches of the Earth's gravity. As it descends through the atmosphere, the creature begins to heat up, glowing red. Superman wants to divert it to the ocean, but the reentry heat burns off his suit and he can't keep up. Out on the ocean, the passengers on a cruise ship interpret the fiery path the creature is cutting through the sky as a shooting star. Then the creature plunges into the ocean, setting up a massive tsunami that threatens the ship. Superman is there to save it. We next see the creature walking along the ocean floor (somewhat like Metallo at the end of "The Way of All Flesh"). The creature soon encounters a nuclear submarine and, as it grasps the sub, seems to drain the energy from the sub's reactor. Superman, who has been searching underwater for the creature, arrives and manages to propel the sub out of the creature's reach. A radio call from Professor Hamilton then sends Superman back to the lab -- they've cracked the code. It turns out that the creature is a synthetic being crafted by aliens to have immense strength, but little intelligence, to be used for heavy labor. It was to be fueled by heat from the aliens' suns, but the creature was able to siphon heat from any source at all, so it became a menace. Based on this information, Hamilton has formulated a plan to stop the creature by using a mixture of chemicals that will create an icy coldness -- like a cold pack in a first-aid kit. But for this plan to work, the creature must be in water, and the lab has just received word that the creature has come ashore. We return from commercial to find the military firing everything it's got at the creature, which is just making the creature stronger. The general refuses to listen to reason and orders the attack to continue. The creature advances and swipes a copter from the sky. It falls toward the general, but Superman saves the day once again. This is enough to get Hardcastle to call off the attack (but he still doesn't look convinced). The creature moves off toward Metropolis, attracted by its lights, and comes to a factory smelting iron, which it attacks to absorb its heat. Superman and Hamilton confer over the radio, and Superman asks that they black out the city. This accomplished, he uses a girder from the factory, glowing from a dose of his heat-vision, as a torch to lure the creature into a man-made lake, the reservoir from a dam. Instead, the moon catches the creature's eye, so Superman moves in close to pull back its attention. Too close! The creature catches Superman in its hand. Even though he is caught, he uses his heat-vision to ignite gas canisters in a boat on the lake. The flames pull in the creature. It stumbles into the lake, and planes zoom in to release chemicals as prearranged with Hamilton. The lake freezes and ice engulfs the creature. It is motionless at last, but Superman is still caught in its fist. He uses the girder to lever himself free. The camera pans up to the full moon. All is well. This episode got off to a rather slow start, but once it got going the action moved along quickly enough to keep my attention away from its shortcomings. Now granted, some of these were done for dramatic effect: the view near the beginning of the asteroid hovering seemingly motionless in the heavens above Metropolis, our ability to hear the creature's grunts even while it is in the vacuum of space. It also seems unlikely that telescopes would not long ago have discovered the creature on the asteroid, but again that would have been much less dramatic. To make up for such flaws, there were a number of nice visual effects, including my favorite, the scene where the creature falls toward Earth, glowing red from the atmospheric friction. In addition, the tension between Hamilton and Hardcastle seemed very real. While our sympathies were clearly supposed to be with Hamilton, the conflict was not all one-sided. At least once, the general had a better point -- delaying the destruction of the asteroid to further study the creature would unnecessarily endanger people on the ground -- even though this was quickly blunted when Superman intervened with another option. Some comments about the general. The character's voice reminded me of Brian Keith, which made the name Hardcastle, not revealed until the end credits, somehow appropriate. (Keith was one of the stars of the TV series HARDCASTLE AND McCORMICK.) But I have to wonder why the character never displayed any insignia to denote the rank of general. In fact, to my nonmilitary eyes, he was wearing sergeant's stripes, but maybe those were hash marks for time in the service. So this wasn't the perfect episode, but we shouldn't expect perfection every time out. It does provide an entertaining half hour, which is good enough for now. Maybe the next episode will be perfect. =========================================== Episode #28: "Father's Day" --------------------------------------------------- Reviewed by Nathan Bredfeldt (hal@seas.smu.edu) October 3, 1997 Written by Mark Evanier and Steve Gerber Directed by Dan Riba Guest-starring Michael Ironside as Darkseid Robert Morse as Desaad Michael Dorn as Kalibak RATINGS: Average: 4.3/5.0 Shields NB: 5.0 Shields - Two guys hittin' each other! And the ending? Wow! My personal favorite, ever! SD: 3.5 Shields - Although the fight between Superman and Kalibak went on too long, any episode featuring Jack Kirby's 4th World characters gets high marks from me. It was also about time that Jonathan and Martha Kent were in almost an entire episode. The interaction between Lois and the Kents was charming. CH: 4.0 Shields - I liked the glimpses we got of Darkseid and his minions (and was pleased to see they care enough about continuity to update us on Mannheim). Back on Earth, have the Kents put Lois on the track of Superman's secret identity? NO: 4.7 Shields - Fun episode, but how much destruction can Metropolis take? Since the dawn of humanity, even before we had a written language, people told stories. And, since then, a few classic archetypes have found their way through the ravages of time, and survive to this very day. Perhaps you've heard of them: the comedy, the tragedy, the epic, and the two guys hitting each other. Of these, the 'two guys hitting each other' archetype is clearly the most appealing. After all, hitting each other is the world's second oldest profession. (NOTE: I wouldn't put any of the above into an English or Anthropology report if I were you!) "Father's Day" carries on the grand tradition of the two guys hitting each other story (in case you hadn't guessed). It starts with one of Darkseid's flunkies sending a death machine to Earth. Superman dispatches it in a heated struggle. Darkseid is upset, and refuses to let his son, Kalibak, follow up on the "test" with a personal confrontation. But Kalibak is conned into going anyhow. He gets Superman's attention and, several thousand dollars of property damage later, is beaten rather soundly (I can't imagine what insurance costs in Metropolis). Then, Darkseid shows up and treats Superman to a "taste" of things to come. It's not a complex episode, but it doesn't have to be. It's a sequel to "Tools of the Trade," and both episodes inch Darkseid closer to his master plan for Earth. "Tools" showed us the capabilities of Darkseid's technology, and "Father's Day" showed us the strength of Darkseid's followers, and his own ruthlessness. Speaking of ruthlessness, did Darkseid really kill his own son? I don't think he did. After all, they went to the trouble to show us that his eye beams can be used to teleport people as well as harm them. But, why did he tell Superman he killed Kalibak if he didn't? Lying is a big part of intimidation, and Darkseid did come all the way to Earth to intimidate Superman. And, of course, we also have the underlying theme and the reference back to the title, all rolled into one. In this case, it is a psychological/sociological message: you are the result of your parent's treatment. Superman, with kind loving parents, is a good person; Kalibak, whom Darkseid disapproves of and even shuns, is the big, evil, stupid character. I should also mention the music: I actually noticed it! That almost never happens! It was pretty spiffy! I cannot recommend this episode highly enough! It has everything! And, if two guys hittin' each other isn't your thing, at least take a look at the last five minutes; Darkseid's appearance on Earth is worth your effort. =========================================== Episode #36: "Warrior Queen" ---------------------------------------------------- Reviewed by Scott Devarney (devarney@ll.mit.edu) November 22, 1997 Written by Hilary J. Bader Directed by Curt Geda Guest-starring Sharon Lawrence as Maxima Miguel Ferrer as De'cine Shannon Kenny as Sazu Brad Garrett as "A Surprise Guest" RATINGS: Average: 3.4/5.0 Shields SD: 2.6 Shields NB: 4.0 Shields - This version of Maxima is good, not great. The twist at the end is worth the half hour! CH: 3.7 Shields - Incorporating yet another element from the comic books. It would be nice to see some real acknowledgment of this in the credits (beyond the vague "Based on DC Comics characters"). NO: 3.5 Shields This episode starts with a bang as Maxima, ruler of Almerac, battles De'cine, a potential suitor. She bests him and then complains about the lack of suitable suitors. Her aide, Sazu, informs her of a potential mate -- Superman. Maxima falls in lust with the recorded images of Superman and goes to Earth to meet him. After Maxima leaves, De'cine plots with Sazu to take over the Almeracian throne. Although Sazu is loyal to Maxima, De'cine convinces her that the people deserve better. On Earth, Maxima gets Superman's attention by trashing Angela Chen's news set on live television. She offers Superman her hand and becomes enraged when he refuses it. As they battle, Maxima realizes that Superman is her equal and would make an ideal mate. She stops fighting and then knocks out an unsuspecting Superman. She brings Superman home to Almerac where she finds De'cine on her throne alongside Sazu. De'cine banishes Maxima, Superman, and Sazu to the catacombs, deep in the bowels of Almerac. Maxima tries to kill Sazu for her treachery but Superman intervenes. The three of them are attacked by a huge multi-tongued monster, the Camorite, which Superman and Maxima defeat by working together. The three of them invade the palace and battle De'cine and his guards to reclaim Maxima's throne. Maxima intends to kill De'cine but again Superman talks her out of it and instead she banishes De'cine to her worst dungeon. Maxima tries to talk Superman into staying, but when she realizes that she can't, she releases him from his "betrothal" and opens a portal to Earth. As Superman exits, he assures her that there's someone for everyone. As a despondent Maxima sits on her throne, [name withheld so you can be surprised if you haven't seen it] crashes through the ceiling, looking for De'cine. Stars sparkle in Maxima's eyes. Maxima makes the transition from comics to cartoon mostly intact. She is regal but extremely self-centered and somewhat tyrannical. Sharon Lawrence turns in a lively and, *ahem*, animated performance as Maxima. She is able to deliver Maxima's speeches without sounding stilted. She and Tim Daly had great chemistry and the war of one-liners between the two was hilarious. The only thing that causes Maxima's portrayal to suffer was her campish boy-craziness which seemed out of character. Although Maxima was well realized, the plot was uneven. It would have been better to see the entire episode focus on Maxima's fixation on Superman and his attempts to ward off her advances. Instead the writers throw in De'cine's boring overthrow attempt. This held no interest because it was never demonstrated that De'cine's rule would be any worse than Maxima's rule. Both characters were shown to be petty and self-serving with no regard for the people of Almerac. Granted, Maxima was shown to temper her violent tendencies, but that can be explained as trying to get on Superman's good side. Artwise, the characters were also a mixed bag. Although Sazu was lovely and ethereal, Maxima looked like a Lana Lang clone in body armor, and De'cine looked like a stereotypical bad guy complete with Snidely Whiplash mustache; the Camorite looked more silly than ferocious. With this episode, the creative team stumbled. Maxima is a great character, excellently portrayed by Sharon Lawrence but the plot let her, and the viewers, down. ______________________________________________ THE MAILBAG ------------------------------------- (sykes@ms.uky.edu, KryptonCN@aol.com) KC Responses are indented and begun with **** =========================================== From: David Thomas Chappell (dtc@acpub.duke.edu) I LOVED Shane Travis' review of ACTION #740 in the latest KC. The unique style was well-done to make the review enjoyable and special yet just as informative as a standard review. =========================================== From: John J. Mejia (jjmejia@cumbia.telecom-co.net) Hi... and congratulations! I read [Shane Travis'] ACTION COMICS #740 review in the KC and I like it! [He has] a very original style! **** Definite kudos to Shane for trying something different! Readers, please continue to let us know when you particularly enjoy what we do. Not only is it good for the ego , but it also helps us to know what works and what doesn't. =========================================== From: ShutUpRob (ShutUpRob@aol.com) In response to the comments of Jeff Sykes: "I think it would be difficult to get four (five) completely new teams without changing the books' format away from the triangles." Actually, I don't think that the triangles are relevant to getting new writers and artists on the Superman books -- if the Superman office were to put some creative thought into the implications of the weekly format. One reason that the triangle format doesn't work right now is that several of the artists and writers involved are noticeably burnt out on the round robin format (Simonson, Janke, Rodier) or otherwise lack basic artistic competence (Bogdanove, but more on that later). With no single art team telling complete stories on a regular basis (with the exception of Jurgens' one-offs and Bog's unusually brilliant -- for Bog -- MOS #75), none of them seem to have much emotional investment in the storylines. Consequently, the storylines seem to meander into awkward sprawls. This was especially apparent during the "Dead Again," "Trial of Superman," and "Death of Clark Kent" storylines, but is still obvious in the current issues which have the meandering pointlessness of soap opera. **** I'll admit that I don't care for Bog and Janke's art, but I also think that "lack[s] basic artistic competence" is a bit harsh. If Bog was incompetent, he wouldn't be working. His art is the closest to the classic style of Joe Shuster, but I think the heavy inks of Dennis Janke spoil that simple elegance. I'd like to see Bog ink his own work or find somebody else, just so we can see some other combinations. In order for the weekly format to work -- and I'd rather see Superman continue as a weekly because I think the format is appropriate to his importance to the DCU -- the artistic element needs to be rethought. My solution is simple -- Rather than this tired round-robin approach, in which the art teams are assigned to individual titles, each art team should be allowed to tell its own arc from beginning to end, in weekly installments. For example, the Jurgens/Frenz team could start a six-part story in SUPERMAN #132 and finish it in ACTION COMICS #743, six weeks later, to be followed by a four-part Immonen/Marzan story beginning in MOS #78 the very next week, to be followed four weeks later with a Bogdanove-written one-parter drawn by Someone Other Than Bogdanove, which would be followed by a three-week Kesel/Grummett arc, and so on and so on and so on ... Subplots could still continue from arc to arc, and the yearly summits would still be necessary, but the titles would turn away from disjointed chapters of ill-thought arcs to more fully realized stories. Too many cooks have obviously been spoiling the broth, so let's separate them in a way that gives each chef a turn to present their own dish. And keeps it coming at one weekly click. **** You seem to be giving Bogdanove a lot of confidence as a writer when, from what I know of his history, he doesn't have much writing experience. Sure he's co-plotted several things with Louise Simonson, and he's written a few back-up stories, but has he ever had a steady writing job in comics? I also prefer having a weekly storyline, but only if it's the best thing for the books. Your idea is an interesting one, espoused by several others, and certainly not infeasible. But... I know, I know . . . there's a kink. Rejiggering the scheduling would be a kicker for at least the first six or seven months, if not longer, while the new individual arcs were worked on, but there are ways around that. The most obvious solution is to bring in extra art teams for temporary stays while the regular teams start working up their individual inventories. I'm sure that some of the artists who don't want to work regularly on the Superman titles would jump at the chance to do single issue fill-ins or short two, three or four month fill-in stints on the individual titles under what would be the last vestiges of the current method of handing out assignments. It would take some extra effort and more advanced planning, but, if they give themselves enough (ie: lots of) transition time, it should end up working. **** It *could* end up working. It would certainly be a lot more work for the editors, especially at first. There are other problems I see in this approach, one being that it does not call for some fresh talent, which has been one of the major outcries against the Superman titles of late. Of course, I'm also convinced that more than just a few of the people griping about the creators aren't even reading the books to even know about the quality of those creators... Another problem is that you are still requiring readers to buy four or five books a month to pick up the whole story, which is another of the primary complaints. There is currently *no* way for the casual reader to enjoy the Man of Steel within DCU continuity. Something has to be done to make Superman accessible to the fan who either won't or can't buy more than one or two Superman titles a month. I truly believe that this is the key to increasing sales. =========================================== From: Pat Gauthier (handsomepat@albedo.net) How could Mike Smith give [BATMAN AND SUPERMAN ADVENTURES: WORLD'S FINEST] 1.5 Shields when he didn't even read it!? You can't base a review solely on cover price. If he was that upset about the price, he shouldn't have reviewed it. Period. **** Well, we've never set a policy on whether or not price should be factored into a review, so there was no reason for him to *not* consider the price of the book in his rating. At $6.95, the price of this book *was* absolutely ridiculous. Granted, for 64 pages in the Prestige Format, this was probably the "correct" price, but given that this is a comic adaptation of an animated film, you'd think DC would have had the sense to publish the book in a lesser format. I can guarantee that I would not have picked it up at that price had I been able to see the movie. =========================================== From: David Joseph Young, Jr. (dayoung@luna.cas.usf.edu) I thought you might like to include some info on the "Superman 3-D" comic which is included in the SUPERMAN RED/SUPERMAN BLUE Collector's Edition. The book is listed in THE OVERSTREET COMIC BOOK PRICE GUIDE as THREE-DIMENSION ADVENTURES. It had an original publishing date of 1953. Apparently it was not originally in the standard comic book format, since Overstreet notes it as "Large size". Overstreet includes a note about "new art". I'm not sure if they are indicating the formatting done to the comics to make them 3-D, or if new art was added to the original stories when they were reprinted. Closer examination of both the original issues (for those who have them!) and THREE-DIMENSION ADVENTURES should clear this up. The three stories reprinted in it: "The Man Who Stole the Sun" is from SUPERMAN #48 (September-October 1947). It features Superman vs. Lex Luthor. "The Origin of Superman" is from SUPERMAN #53 (July-August 1948). It is the first full length story of Superman's origin, which had only previously appeared as two pages in SUPERMAN #1. "The Man Who Bossed Superman" is from SUPERMAN #51 (March-April 1948). Superman outwits racketeer "Pudge" Purdy. **** Anyone up for a historical review of this reprint for a future Phantom Zone? While reading the entire comic with those 3-D glasses on caused a bit of a headache, I actually enjoyed the reprint more than I did the RED/BLUE special. Not that the latter was particularly bad, mind you. It's just that there was more playful fun in the classic stories. About the only time we see playful fun done well by the current creative teams is when Mxy shows up. I hope a lot of you are buying the SUPERMAN and SUPERMAN: ACTION COMICS ARCHIVES. These are great sources for the classic stories which almost none of us will ever be able to afford in their original editions. This message is to let you other Superman fans know where we stand in terms of what Superman stories have been reprinted in the Archives series, and to give you (and DC) an idea of what should be reprinted next. So far, DC has released four volumes of SUPERMAN ARCHIVES which each reprint four issues of SUPERMAN (series one), and one volume of SUPERMAN: THE ACTION COMICS ARCHIVES which reprints 15 issues of ACTION. Chronologically this means that we have SUPERMAN reprints from #1 (Summer 1939) to #16 (May-June 1942), and ACTION COMICS reprints from #1 (June 1938) to #20 (January 1940). In case you are unaware, the ACTION COMICS ARCHIVES is only reprinting the Superman feature stories, not the various back-up stories, which allows many more issues to be reprinted in each ACTION ARCHIVE. By my estimates, it would take two more ACTION COMICS ARCHIVES volumes to come about even with the SUPERMAN ARCHIVES series. Assuming fifteen ACTION COMICS issues per volume, a second book should include ACTION COMICS #21 (February 1940) through 35 (April 1941) and a third book ACTION COMICS #36 (May 1941) through #50 (July 1942). Therefore, to catch up I feel that the next Superman volumes DC puts out in its DC ARCHIVES series should be second and third SUPERMAN: THE ACTION COMICS ARCHIVES volumes. Next, I think DC should catch up with all the other early Superman stories which were not in SUPERMAN or ACTION COMICS. This volume would primarily reprint the Superman stories from WORLD'S BEST COMICS/WORLD'S FINEST COMICS, which started in Spring 1941. It would also include the Superman stories from the NEW YORK WORLD'S FAIR 1939 and 1940 issues and the story in SUPERMAN'S CHRISTMAS ADVENTURE (1940). It would also include any other "special" Superman comics which I'm missing. I'm not sure how many issues each volume could contain so I can't say exactly how many volumes this would be. >From there DC would rotate the three series of Superman Archives, SUPERMAN, ACTION COMICS, and SUPERMAN IN WORLD'S FINEST (which would continue to include "special" Superman one-shots and tie-ins such as the SUPERMAN-TIM issues in which Superman appeared) once a year. Hopefully by "printing" this in KC, DC will approve of my idea and act on it. All of you who feel the same way, please e-mail me and let me know (dayoung@luna.cas.usf.edu). Maybe we could even organize a petition to send to DC requesting that they continue their excellent DC Archives series, particularly including ALL the early Superman material in chronological order. Thanks for your time. P.S.--Batman fans get in touch with me too. I'd also like to see DC start a BATMAN IN WORLD'S FINEST ARCHIVES series which would cover both WF and his stories outside of BATMAN and DETECTIVE such as the NEW YORK WORLD'S FAIR issue and later on the Robin and Batman stories in STAR-SPANGLED COMICS (1947-52). And Wonder Woman fans make sure you support the first WONDER WOMAN ARCHIVES volume coming out soon, and let DC know you want them to continue reprinting the Amazon's appearances in her own book, SENSATION COMICS, and COMIC CAVALCADE. **** With new archive editions planned for ALL-STAR COMICS, BATMAN, JUSTICE LEAGUE OF AMERICA, LEGION OF SUPER-HEROES, and WONDER WOMAN, it would appear that DC has once again fired up their "historical division," so new Superman volumes would seem likely. I also agree with you that a WORLD'S FINEST ARCHIVE is a natural... The only problem with these archives is their price. As hardcovers, they are simply too expensive for a lot of readers, so I think DC should consider following them with softcover editions. Alternatively, I think they should seriously look into multimedia formats. The recent announcement about the forthcoming SUPERMAN MULTIPATH ADVENTURES (see News and Notes) is very exciting, as I see this as an attempt to port comics into other forms. Something else that I think could sell well is a series of CD-ROM collections. Not only could DC provide Archive-type reprintings on CD-ROM, but they could also include volumes of cover galleries, character encyclopedias, and much more. Think about it -- you're trying to remember about that certain encounter with Brainiac, so you pop in the Encyclopedia CD-ROM and search for the exact comic in which that meeting appeared, and then you pop in another CD-ROM and actually *read* that issue! This kind of thing seems a natural, especially with the world seemingly in preparation to move all print media into the digital age. -- Jeff Sykes ________________________________________________________________